|Reviews for Second Best|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
she is a desperate thirsty ass hoe
| EmmaDel chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
You write Bella just like she is in the books. Good job. The problem is that it reminds me of why I don't like her. She is so weak. Most other girls would have responded in the same situation by saying something like, "I'm sorry I hurt you, but you left me. What I did while you were gone is none of your business." It was like she was making plans to die a lonely virgin if Edward never came back.
| EmmaDel chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
"It hurts that you believed the lie so easily."
That line made me angry. I want Bella to curse him out for saying that. Bella spent way too much time in the book whining about Edward. I wanted her to get angry at the way he treated her.
I wanted her to move on like she is doing now.
PS. I hate Bella and Edward.
| corkykellems chapter 16 . 8/25/2012
I hope She makes the right decision...jacob of course...Good Story
| corkykellems chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
Oh She is so so Stupid...Go Away Edward...It's Jake's turn to be Happy
| Nohemy chapter 16 . 4/22/2012
gahhhh why haven't you finished this...
I read all 16 chaps and then I looked up to see when was ur last update and it was 2010...
grrr... hope you add more to this cuz it's way to good to just leave it...
| bmthespian chapter 16 . 8/16/2011
Just realized I never reviewed this chapter...cute Jake/drunk Bella interaction
| beckylovestwilight chapter 16 . 7/30/2011
love it cant wait for the next chapter xxx
| AnaJadeYu chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
I really liked this chapter. The way Bella's thoughts go around in circles is exactly how I would react in her situation. Great writing, great story.
| Louise M Frost chapter 16 . 10/16/2010
enjoying your story.
pissed Bella lol
Jake is the best choice by far
| EmpressHimiko chapter 16 . 10/11/2010
| Wolfgal4evr chapter 9 . 6/27/2010
i am soooo team jake:D Plz make Bells choose Jake! PLZ! they already made a the book where Bella chose Edward so JAKE should get Bella in this one! thank you!
| TrueLovehtgbetr chapter 16 . 6/14/2010
PLEASE WRITE MORE
| Jebbs Cullen chapter 16 . 6/6/2010
Sorry to hear about your grandad! I hope all is well!
Pleasssseeee continue this story!
| getinmyvankiddies.iamandypants chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
ok so im not saying i love smut, but i dont absolutly hate it (like i hate EDWARD!) it was cute! and i liked the first 2 chapters!