Reviews for Second Best
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
she is a desperate thirsty ass hoe
EmmaDel chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
You write Bella just like she is in the books. Good job. The problem is that it reminds me of why I don't like her. She is so weak. Most other girls would have responded in the same situation by saying something like, "I'm sorry I hurt you, but you left me. What I did while you were gone is none of your business." It was like she was making plans to die a lonely virgin if Edward never came back.
EmmaDel chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
"It hurts that you believed the lie so easily."

That line made me angry. I want Bella to curse him out for saying that. Bella spent way too much time in the book whining about Edward. I wanted her to get angry at the way he treated her.

I wanted her to move on like she is doing now.

PS. I hate Bella and Edward.
corkykellems chapter 16 . 8/25/2012
I hope She makes the right decision...jacob of course...Good Story
Thanks
corkykellems chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
Oh She is so so Stupid...Go Away Edward...It's Jake's turn to be Happy
Nohemy chapter 16 . 4/22/2012
gahhhh why haven't you finished this...

I read all 16 chaps and then I looked up to see when was ur last update and it was 2010...

grrr... hope you add more to this cuz it's way to good to just leave it...
bmthespian chapter 16 . 8/16/2011
Just realized I never reviewed this chapter...cute Jake/drunk Bella interaction
beckylovestwilight chapter 16 . 7/30/2011
love it cant wait for the next chapter xxx
AnaJadeYu chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
I really liked this chapter. The way Bella's thoughts go around in circles is exactly how I would react in her situation. Great writing, great story.
Louise M Frost chapter 16 . 10/16/2010
enjoying your story.

pissed Bella lol

Jake is the best choice by far
EmpressHimiko chapter 16 . 10/11/2010
MOAR!

please?
Wolfgal4evr chapter 9 . 6/27/2010
i am soooo team jake:D Plz make Bells choose Jake! PLZ! they already made a the book where Bella chose Edward so JAKE should get Bella in this one! thank you!
TrueLovehtgbetr chapter 16 . 6/14/2010
PLEASE WRITE MORE
Jebbs Cullen chapter 16 . 6/6/2010
Sorry to hear about your grandad! I hope all is well!

Pleasssseeee continue this story!
getinmyvankiddies.iamandypants chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
ok so im not saying i love smut, but i dont absolutly hate it (like i hate EDWARD!) it was cute! and i liked the first 2 chapters!
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