Reviews for The Past Returns
heart shot girl chapter 14 . 12/29/2003
Beautiful.
Absolutly beautiful - some misspelled words but nothing big and hardly noticed. The plot was nicely done, and it was easy to follow and I liked the fact that Julia saved Faye - something I wouldn't have thought of. Nice job.
kathy chapter 14 . 11/7/2002
your story had some gramatical and spelling errors which made it a little hard for me to understand what you were trying to get across to the reader sometimes, but all-in-all in was a FABULOUS story, just FABULOUS!

ps. hope you come out with a sequal, like where Faye's past comes back to haunt her and she's having these horrific nightmares about a memory that hasn't returned yet or she didn't know of, something dramatic but nothing having to do with a past love or the syndicate. And while they are chasing after her past she get badly injured where she can't go outside of the bebop for a while let alone even walk for a while (spike must carry her to the bedroom and places like that.) and she is caught a few time sitting and starring staight out the wall-size-window jumbled memories in her mind and when she tries to get up she faints into Spike or Jet's arms. :)

you know, things like that. :) :)

(i know i am a total nerd about this stuff ;}
someone chapter 14 . 7/22/2002
That's a good story, a lot of these events I have seen in movies, but I liked it.
Makaylia chapter 14 . 5/26/2002
WOOHOO! AWesome ending! Love that Julia saved Faye, it made me like her for a nanosecond! (Faye Rocks!)

Great story! YOu should write more soon
Makaylia chapter 3 . 5/26/2002
Yeowza! Spike's in the mood and he ain't takin' no for an answer! Nice chapter! _
esther chapter 14 . 5/1/2002
What a great story! I Love happy endings._
Kyra1 chapter 14 . 4/15/2002
*sniff**sniff* Awww...I had to finsih reading it. It was lovely.
Tsuaskikitty chapter 1 . 4/1/2002
oh by the way! Please make a sequel!

Thanks!
Tsuaskikitty chapter 14 . 4/1/2002
Very nicely written! I love the romance between Spike and Faye. These are two of my favorite characters, thanks for writing a story involving both of them along with rest of the CB crew. I hope to see more of your work.

See you later
Mei Tsuki Kage chapter 14 . 3/28/2002
I FUCKIN HATE YOU!

VICIOUS DIED AND DIDN'T EVEN TAKE SPIKE WITH HIM!

FFFFFFFUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYUUUUUOOOOOOO!
Mei Tsuki Kage chapter 13 . 3/28/2002
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Mei Tsuki Kage chapter 12 . 3/28/2002
hey! Vicious is not that cold/sick

evil, yes

but don't teist his character
Tree Kat chapter 14 . 3/24/2002
*Applause* wow, that was a trip! Nicely written, good plot...only one thing its lacking...A SEQUEL!(hint, hint) but, if you think that would ruin it than another story would do (grins) Keep on writing!
Lisa chapter 14 . 3/21/2002
And the crowd goes wild! That was too good! Eric's so cute! Seeing Spike settle down, and with Faye, who could ask for anything more!

Take A Bow Space Cowgirl!
AMJ chapter 14 . 3/21/2002
very good.
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