|Reviews for Hidden Paths|
| bookgirl113 chapter 24 . 6/10
This story is so good! It's too bad you've discontinued it.
| bookgirl113 chapter 19 . 6/10
She should have told him! This is so sad, I'm gonna cry...
| bookgirl113 chapter 15 . 6/10
No. No, no, no. You have done NOTHING wrong. Eleanor was horrible, truly horrible, and I had never expected that from her, but you didn't even go out of your way to insult her. She started this fight, and all you have done is refute her points.
Mistress Florence isn't so bad, I suppose. The scene between them was really sweet. Also, Daria shouldn't feel too horrible for not knowing their names. She should learn them, yes, but when she joined the family she was swept up into a whole new life, and she WAS being taught how to be a "proper" lady (aka, avoid peasants).
| bookgirl113 chapter 13 . 6/10
That last line was sad, and Daria WAS being quite naive, but Jerrold has never given her a reason to think otherwise. Also, what is it with him and believing that all species and creatures are equal, but believing the peasants and poorer humans around him are less than dirt?!
| PoseidonThePanda chapter 21 . 7/17/2014
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!
I wish Eleanor would talk to Daria already, ugh!
| PoseidonThePanda chapter 20 . 7/17/2014
So short...Much too short...
What up with Jerold?
| PoseidonThePanda chapter 19 . 7/17/2014
YOU SHOULD MAKE, LIKE, 37 MORE CHAPTER! UPDATE EVERYDAY!
| Cat chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
Actually, fencing swords were origionally called Rapiers, they were thin but stromg with a very sharp point. Sabres are the ones u ussaly see in pictures of cartoon pirates or with a middle eastern person. It is 40% possible i have gotten my facts wrong though. Great story
| Mima2408 chapter 24 . 10/9/2012
Please write more! this book is really amazing, and seriously addictive... :P
But please write more, dying to know!
| Wickedforlife chapter 15 . 10/2/2012
OMG SERAFINA I LOVE YOU!
| Wickedforlife chapter 6 . 10/1/2012
Oh my god, it's soooo gorgeous. Just, the tiniest things; the pheonix from the ashes, the cockroach crawling out of her sisters mouth, the fact that her family lived in poverty because they could not accept the diamond, and thus accept that her father died for them. It's one of those stories where you read it and then you look back at the emotions and elements. And the rise and fall of character and emotion is like ethernal music. The characters are amazing, but not overdone. And the fact that you've managed to get this far without using dialoge to keep interest is unbelievable. Where did this idea come from? As a writer I know that ideas just sort of hit you in this eureka moment where every piece of the puzzle suddenly comes together. But there's always a feeling of what kind of source or muse sparked that enlightenment. Do you feel like that, or did you plan this all out? (which is even more amazing)
| theTarkheena chapter 24 . 7/23/2012
This is so fun and entertaining! I just read the whole thing today! Please continue it!
| I-am-a-Firefly chapter 24 . 7/20/2012
Was that a cliffie?
| xXJustSomeRandomKidXx chapter 23 . 7/16/2012
Well then, I don't know what I'm suppose to say here cuz, well, I haven't logged on to FF in a while. I kinda gave up on it. I'm thinking that my year of writing was only from gr. 6-7 T-T I miss the days when I could just sit down with no idea what the chapter would be about, then BAM! It's there and ready to post...*sigh* haha enough about my sad writing life, and onto your story! (:
So I noticed Jerrold was missing this chapter (; does tht mean more of him in the next? But I suppose Jackson being with Daria might make Jerrold, you know (;
LOL and as soon as Olga came, man I was laughing so hard. Like mother like daughter, eh? You should totally make a scene where Olga's wig comes flying off or something. What a sight that would be! Mad she would just be walking around completely oblivious the whole time
Okay I've rainout of things to say! I'm off to the library and replenish my hoard of books (: I may have been out of it in the writing world, but that doesn't mean I've given up reading!
| tj2317 chapter 22 . 4/16/2012
I love it please continue