Reviews for The Observed
ashie-loves-hiei-and-kags chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Wow, very interesting story! i really liked it!
goddessofbirth chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Oh, cute! I love seeing Rayne from outside POVs. Now off to read the sequel!
neisprime chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Wonderful narrative!
verkisto chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Perfect for generating the warm fuzzies. Thank you for a slightly different and very well-written take on Rayne. Cheers! ;-)
pbk chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
that was fantastic, thanks for sharing!
Whyt Wulf chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Nice. And I'd love to read that story.

I enjoy the fact that you didn't need to use either name - your descriptions were perfectly capable of identifying them for us.
jane0904 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Perfectly Zoe, particularly the last line.
Sunshineali chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Absolutely fabulous! This is exactly what one would think they would do. She'd do nice things for him and he'd (maybe unknowingly or subconsciously) do things for her in return. They'd just grow together. How can they not. Very nice. Hope to hear more. ;)
Ultrawoman chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
That is really beautiful. You made me feel so sad for Zoe because she's lost Wash, and at the same time all warm and fuzzy with the Rayne angle. Yeah, beautiful :)

Ultra
sapienlover chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
A superb little glimpse into what-might-be. Beautifully balanced and totally in character, this little fic just made my morning. Thank you.