Reviews for Ringbearer Verses
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
This was well written. Shame the original poem was taken off years ago, for the author deserves credit, too. This poem sounds like Sam is the narrator, or the narrator is anyone watching Frodo sail away.

The only grammatical error I caught was 'servent', in the last verse, which needs to be fixed to 'servant'.

Good work. I'm favoriting this poem and putting it in my community 'A Hobbit's Comeback'.

Aria Breuer
Arafax chapter 1 . 11/10/2006

Great job!

Words cannot even begin to describe how much I enjoy reading your stuff.
daima ashiki chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
great poem. it seems to be written in sam's perspective, although i don't know if you meant to do that. i think it wonderfully shows sam's pain at having to watch frodo go.
Kora chapter 1 . 2/13/2002
very good! quite reflective, i like the "o ringbearer ringbearer" format. yeah if i sound especially cheesy in this it's b/c i'm trying to be less redundant in my reviews. i loved this one too! ahh yay you!
Ocarina Rune Scholar chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
I miss voyage to Valinor, I'm on. Great poem. -ORS (P.S. If I accidently signed off as ORC in one of my reviews, don't blame me - my sister uses that as a curse word. I am NOT a GOBLIN, nor a YRCH.)