Reviews for High Noon: After Breaking Dawn A Twilight Fanfic
TwoToTango chapter 39 . 4/4
What a ride.
At first I was worried that Eli might turn out as a bad guy. But he was essential to the whole story.
Alice's story is so cool and what a plot twist to have those creepy Romanians as the masterminds behind all of this.
I also loved your epilogues, particularly the class get together.
Very well written. Thank you so much!
AHarryPotterLover1 chapter 37 . 11/6/2023
Leah is a real b*tch! I can't stand her! I've always hated her and her attitude towards Bella! I've never understood why SM never killed her! What an insufferable character!
I'd have preferred to kill her than Irina in the end of BD. At least Irina showed redemption in the end. No one would miss Leah!
Cknsw chapter 38 . 1/5/2023
Thanks for the outtakes. You are enormously talented. I reiterate. High noon is definitely in my top 10 FF. It’s not to long. Another outage at 100 years would be fantastic.. or I may just be being greedy. Thank you.
Cknsw chapter 36 . 1/5/2023
Just fabulous! Covering so many topics that SM stopped before getting to. I’ve read 700 plus FF and this is definitely in my top 10.
Cknsw chapter 29 . 1/5/2023
This story is maturing wonderfully.
Cknsw chapter 6 . 1/4/2023
This is the first FF of yours I’ve read. It’s well written and the tenses are consistently correct. The B&E interactions are true to canon…Maybe too true due to rating. I’m enjoying this so far.
itsLissa chapter 8 . 11/30/2022
Omg i never thought about the name in english for Pão de Açúcar...Sugar Loaf, i'm dying here. LMAOF
SavKelly chapter 14 . 11/1/2022
This chapter also mentions starting out as Freshman in Forks!
They arrived August 2003. Bella arrived January 2005!
You told me to let you know, so here you go!
SavKelly chapter 8 . 10/17/2022
I would like to relay information. The Cullens came to Forks in August of 2003. Rosalie and Emmett and Jasper started out as Juniors while Edward and Alice started out as Sophomores, and not freshman.
I mention this because the Twilight fanpage had gotten this wrong and I relayed the information to them to fix it.
If they were to have started as freshman, they would’ve arrived in 2002 instead because their graduation date June of 2006. But if they started out as freshman in 2003, their graduation would’ve been June of 2007.
So yes, Edward and Alice started highschool as sophomores when they arrived in Forks.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 39 . 3/25/2022
I enjoyed reading about the battle from Felix perspective. A lot was going on and it was cool see it from both sides.

Overall this was a very cool story. The characters were all in character and developed in a very believable way. I like that you actually had the characters move foreward in their lives. Things changed in an organic way. Very cool. Thanks for writing.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 38 . 3/24/2022
All the call backs from Twilight were fun. Edward revealing he set up Angela and Ben was especially fun. Its neat seeing Edward interact with Bellas friends, since he never really did that.

The idea of them using make up to make themselves look older is cool too.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 37 . 3/24/2022
Its cool that Edward is pulling a Doogie Houser and trying to be a young doctor. I imagine they won't be able to stay in one place longer than 2-3 years, since even trying to ne in his early twenties is probably tough for a person physically 17 years old. But its probably worth it, as going through high school over and over really has to suck.

Glad all of them as a whe are moving foreward in their lives rather than being stuck in the same cycle over and over.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 36 . 3/23/2022
I'm surprised how much I ended up enjoying Renee in this story
Her belief going from thinking they were secret agents to aliens was ridiculous yet frightening close to the truth at the same time. It was fun. And I loved she finally got to have a real relationship with her grand daughter.

Speaking of Nessie, a part of me is a bit bummed she didn't get a big moment in the final battle. The story sort of teased her bring able to get through the shield, but she never got to do it. As she's just a kid in a lot of ways its probably for the best, but part of me still wanted to see it.

The Romanians being the masters made perfect sense, and its cool how they ended up being tied to both Edward and Alice. Their plan really did up ending up perfectly in a round about way. Funny how things just happen the way they should.

I liked how the council came about. Them choosing rotating leaders is pretty cool.

Overall cool story, and I look forward to reading the sequel and epilogies. I'm assuming Seth hooks up with Chloe given the amount on time she got in the story. Fingers crossed.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 35 . 3/22/2022
Glad we got a real fight. A lot of stories tend to avoid that, but I enjoyed it.

And like a lot of the more believable stories where the fight actually occurs, we did get casualties..selfishly I'm glad all my favorite characters came out alive.

I'm curious what Edward and Alices had in mimd before the first began when they asked everyone to leave. Was it purely to protect Bella and Jasper? They even allowed Aro to read Edward.

Overall I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm curious how they will move forward with no one leading the Volturi. I'm guessing Felix will stick around, but I'm assuming a few members of the Cullens and their allies will need to rule with them.

Alec escaping is interesting too. He's potentially the most dangerous one in a battle. It'll be interesting to see where he pops up again.
nolbernabeyahoo.com chapter 34 . 3/22/2022
A bit surprised the Volturi jumped the gun a little here, but I'm excited for the big fight.
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