Reviews for Intertwined
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2015
Update?
Lost in a World of Idiots chapter 3 . 4/12/2015
MA content is not allowed on FFN. Either remove the MA content, edit the story so that it's less explicit or move it to another site.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/17/2014
Please update this
hoigui chapter 3 . 6/30/2014
blease update soon
Spoon10488 chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Awesome story.
Lavonya chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
Wow... "What the hell?!" is a good question to that dream!
I LOVE THIS!
Lavonya chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
He's turning into a mech-organic hybrid!
Lavonya chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
WHAT... HAPPENED... TO... SAM?
Poor Sam...
thablueGRRL chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Not a bad story, but I feel the story's quality is lacking a bit in maturity. Nothing that can't be fixed with a beta and some sentences rephrased/added/removed, etc.
PaleAngel90 chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
Are you gonna Write more?,i dont like this cliffhanger of suspense,please dont be mean to your readers :)
sdoyle1989 chapter 3 . 3/20/2013
great story keep it up
AkiraNatsume chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
More chapters please.
blackrose2255 chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
Please write another chapter! It's really good!
aliya87 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
is a continuation of fanfiction?
Mylover13 chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
I love this chapter. There was plenty of action. And I love the dream of Sam It's so hot and sexy. Aaah
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