|Reviews for Have to Drive|
| flootzavut chapter 18 . 3/30
As a committed Gibbs fangirl I just want to say that I pretty much adore Gibbs throughout this chapter, being all laconic and rolling his eyes and just all, you know, GIBBS :3 and this story overall? Fantastic. Kudos :D
| flootzavut chapter 17 . 3/30
"Stupid ginger bastard had no idea what he was in for."
Now that is a PERFECT end of chapter line if I ever saw one.
| flootzavut chapter 16 . 3/30
"So I said...something dumb, you know, something like that me not enjoying it wasn't going to be a problem, but if he really wanted me to suffer he'd turn me over so I had to look at his ugly face while he was getting his rocks off."
Awww, so proud of our Probie right now, I tell ya. (I know it's just fanfic and he's not real anyway but I don't care, I am proud :3)
"It was brand new, despite him feeling like he'd been married to Tim for the last five years."
"Tim had the kind of bravery that let him be himself despite taking abuse for just that."
"But we're going to be happy, Tony. We're going to laugh all the time and fuck like teenagers and watch each other's backs, and we'll be so fucking happy."
CLIFFHANGER EVILNESS glad I'm not reading in real time...
| flootzavut chapter 15 . 3/30
I don't know if it was deliberate, but I immediately imagined "Anders" as being played by Michael Trucco and had a BSG fangirl moment, JSYK ;)
"I'd settle for the isn't-he-adorable end of the apathy pool."
| flootzavut chapter 14 . 3/30
I think I'm probably one of the minority in that I tend to read slash despite smut, not because of it ;p because an awful lot of the M/M smut I read just... well I didn't even bother with trying slash for the longest time because it all read like generic porn and it made me cringe, and it took finding a couple of actual decent writers of it to convert me. This, however, was in character (bliss!) and very hot and rather sweet and occasionally funny all at the same time, which is my kind of smut regardless of who's getting it on with whom. I thought Tony's overwhelmedness was funny and rather adorable, and I've always assumed that Tim being less than obviously confident would probably mean he would put a lot of effort in between the sheets, and that the fact he could actually keep up with Abby said a lot, so I can totally buy intensity being the name of his game ;)
| flootzavut chapter 13 . 3/30
"Might want to take that inside, Tim. This is a respectable neighborhood, they don't understand your kind of love."
I love how you're bringing Jethro into this :3
Also, Tony's mental note about having a change of clothes reminds me of the time he had to wear Ducky's spare NCIS outfit LOLOLOLOLOL
Well done Gibbs for giving Tim the necessary headslap ;D
I know there are still five chapters so I'm biting my tongue waiting for disaster, but I like that Gibbs is enlisting all the help he can to keep them safe.
| flootzavut chapter 11 . 3/30
*snort* that whole scene by the computer was soooooo adorable and then Abby *snort* you just know she would *unladylike sniggers*
| flootzavut chapter 10 . 3/30
Okay the fact the woman is called Pam Ayers kills me because Pam Ayres. Which may not mean anything to you, assuming you're not British anyway, but damn. All right, back to the actual story now.
"I'm impressive. Don't you hear the legends they tell about me around here?"
"I'm choosing to ignore those so I can maintain this sudden good impression I have of you."
"Tim was...was a pasty little dork with a permanent pout and the tendency to ramble on and on and on and on about the most boring crap in the entire world"
I feel almost guilty how much I sniggered at this. Bless. Accurate!
| flootzavut chapter 9 . 3/30
"The macho act looks better on me than on you."
Now there's an exchange that couldn't been culled straight from the show ;)
"It was hard to look away from him, to break the gaze. There was something there, in Tim's face, like surprise but...deeper. Like awe. Like Tim really hadn't realized that Tony would go through hell to protect him.
Like now that he knew Tony would, it really meant something."
| flootzavut chapter 8 . 3/30
"Well, one, I'm not entirely sure there is a Golden Girls marathon on anywhere. And two, neither of us have hair long enough to braid. So I might have lured you here under false pretences."
big adorable eejit
I keep losing track of what's in the current chapter and what's not, so if some of these comments are a bit wayward, that's just my brain having a funny five minutes, just so you know.
I obviously totally forgot you had said this was a quiet chapter, because when Tim didn't answer the knocks on his door you had me worried he'd been abducted from right inside Gibbs' house 8-o
Me, I like a slow burn in all kinds of fic, so just to let you know that I'm sure some would be disappointed, I for one really like it ;D
"Gibbs didn't just talk that loyal Marine don't-leave-my-people-behind stuff because it was a nice rap. He hurt for his team."
And that's why we love him even though he's a jerk and a bastard and kind of an asshole. (And I will honestly never get over how damn sweet the man who actually plays him is.)
| flootzavut chapter 7 . 3/30
Tony getting all excited about a boys' night in is there most adorable thing, I laughed my ass off.
Gibbs doing his "oh my god I am going to regret this" permission for Tony to stay there too did give it a run for its money, though ;D
Tony and Abby squaring off about who gets to have Tim's back I cannot deal.
| flootzavut chapter 6 . 3/30
I clicked post too quickly on the previous chapter and forgot to say that I ADORE Ducky and Jimmy for being all over it and protecting Tim without needing to be asked, and Tony for making sure he has a story that fits the evidence. :3
I chuckled at that "intense" comment coming back to bite Tony in the ass, muahahahahaha.
"And that means something important that you're going to get around to telling me any minute now."
another pitch perfect Gibbs line!
| flootzavut chapter 5 . 3/30
Hurricane Scuito :3
"Tony frowned, waiting until Abby was looking back at Ziva before reaching over to straighten the mess she'd made with Tim's hair.
He turned back in time to catch a bemused eyebrow raise from Gibbs, and he felt his cheeks go hot inexplicably."
this made me laugh way too hard
| flootzavut chapter 4 . 3/30
"Pissed Gibbs... a glowering force of nature."
Oh, Tim :((((((
| flootzavut chapter 3 . 3/30
I had to laugh at Gibbs' long-suffering permission for them to bring Jethro back to the Navy Yard. I could just see/hear that moment so perfectly.
Tony showing off even to himself is so Tony :3
He understood the idea of privacy even if he didn't personally support LITERALLY CRYING LAUGHING STOP you have Tony so down pat it just kills me.
"He knew when to just be a prick and when to unleash the unholy temper"
perfect description is perfect