Reviews for Memories
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
so...he killed his wife and children? wtf
Williamgbirkin chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
You got the "beautiful nurse" from Tamora Pierce's book Trickster's Choice didn't you?
I did NOT see that coming
AviatorsGrandScheme chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Anniria chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Okay M. Night Shyamalan, wow what a twist, lol. I did not see that all. well done.
OrgasmicCheesecake chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I'll admit the main got a few laughs out of me, and the end got a few chuckle out of me. Way to take the plot twist concept to a freaking 2000. Excellently written.
DeepRave chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
HOLY MOTHER OF GOOD GOD, HOLY MOLY! That was the most unpredictable ending I have EVER read! AWESOME! I ,never in a MILLION years, saw that one coming... awesome...
Ranviel chapter 1 . 7/14/2010 I want to be mad, since it's clear you meant to mess with our heads, but I can't tell if it was done out of malice or just so we could enjoy the stupor of disbelief we got from reading it.

Everything except for the last paragraph and author's note were just so well-written and cheerful that the ending was a very rare shock. As bad as that was though, the worst part was the Author's Note at the end, suggesting that there was a way to foretell of the family's grisly fate.

While it was clear that something had happened to the rest of the family by the beginning due to the flashbacks, for you to suggest that the ending didn't come out of nowhere had to be the biggest mindscrew of the whole story.

Anyways, while it'd be easy to remember this story as a joke at the reader's expense, I did quite enjoy the cheerful parts, and even the "twist" was executed well enough for me to look back on this fic and laugh alongside everyone else.

Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading.~
puffdadder chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
holy crap that was...unexpected. kinda want him dead now actually, went from happy memories to BAM! hmm for the plot twist great grammar, and NOT mary sue. only problem i could see is where the hell did he get that idea from? did she cheat on him? were they not his kids (and even then, he was an orphan)? did kyuubi take over etc. it detracts very slightly but otherwise i give a 9.5/10
dragonheart967 chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
I can't believe that he killed his fucking family. That is such a fucked up ending dude.
Thoughts13 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
HO SHIT! The ending was out of the blue, I had no idea that was coming at all. I read it and I was like OMGWTFBBQ!oneoneoneeleventyone. There is so much backstory required! just wow
Jigoku no Yami chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
swet. I LIKE this.
Mes-012 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
What the hell was that? i was reading, smiling to myself, albeit i never really liked the NaruSaku pairing, because it was just so nice. Finally reached the bottom of the page with the mouse all ready to click to read the next chapter, and you hit me with that? Made me read it three times, go back up to the very top, read the bottom again, before seeing the A/N...Damn, really did NOT see that coming.
Unrelenting chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
wat the hell?
O0megaChaos chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
you are evil. good job man
Omi aka Wandering Maverick chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
...i still don't get it...he wanted freedom...from what! 'From all things'...first off that isn't even possible because EVERYTHING...even life itself has some sort of rule one has to abide by, so PURE freedom isn't possible. was an interesting story at the very least.
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