|Reviews for Redo|
| UnderxGravity chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Not often a fic can make me Literally "LOL". The first kiss scene, how she doubted she'd even kissed him after such a stumble, made me laugh so much! The first scene was really good to hook the audience too, with Kit and his little victory dance with Nita's father. I love this!
| vapanalley chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Oh my goodness I could not tell you how many boy-asks-girl-he-likes-about-girl-advice-and-it-turns-out-to-be-the-same-girl ficlets I've seen. But this just tops them all. This seriously hurt to read and when they did kiss it was oh so sweet. :) Amazing to the nth degree!
| britt chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This is such an amazing piece! Its rare to find fanfiction that is actually beautiful and well written. I hope you keep writing!
| maple the wacky tree chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
OMG! that was so freakin' good! i didn't think it was humanly possible to laugh your head off and squeal in delight at the same time. kudos! kudos! you did such a good job keeping them in character. to be honest, an awkward screw-up seems exactly what their first kiss would be like.
squee! the fluff nearly made my heart go out. i'm gonna make you pay the medical bills. ;D
| Emily chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
That was really cute. : ) Thank you. The first bit, where Kit crashes into Nita's dad, was too funny. What a great story! That made my day; now I'm smiling like an idiot (who should be working on her schoolwork) at how happy that story was. : ) Aw...
| Starbucks3894 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Aw. I love Kit/Nita fics. And this one was especially adorable. :)
| ThReE AqUiLa chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
| SnowsongIsAJaypawFan chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
haha. The car/bike needs a name.
| Curlscat chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
That was adorable and I loved it and thank you for writing something new!
| Bubblesswimmer chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
I like it a all lot! Would have been interesting to throw Ronan's name in there...
| QuixoticQuest chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Let me start by saying I'm not huge on one-shots. But this one really works. I like the pacing, the whole motorcycle thing is cool (makes me want one, ha, ha- though I'd be too chicken to ride one). Anyways, the characters aren't OOC, and the entire setup is nicely paced. The kissing is also realistic for their characters, they probably wouldn't get it right the first time.
This is really cute and an awesome story.
| Eavan chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This is beautiful. I love it. It's well-written, and realistic, and totally sweet. Ki' ts obsession with the motorcycle reflects interests he has and his personality, and the fact that he involved with his feelings for Nita makes complete sens.
I'm sorry about these apparent typo; I use the speech recognition progra to type and its acting up in this window
anyway, because a well-rounded critique is important, I'll just add tha the way you detail his excitement makes it sounds just a little bit over the top initially, I mea, I'm not sure that we need quite so man illustrations of his frantic energy y n. T
. M s
also, I feel like you're getting into a popular but overused way of expressing intense emotion namely the very long sentence:gulping, Nita felt as though strings of tension had been cut all over her body, and that she would probably be relieved as soon as the numbness wore off, but she couldn’t think about that right now, because there was still at least four feet of loaded air between them, and one of them had to bridge it…
it's just that one sentence, thoug. h,
| Reading Redhead chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Gah, this is so adorable, and more importantly, so REAL. It usually doesn't work out like in the movies, and one thing that I love about Nita and Kit is that I know that when they fall in love (no ifs about it) it'll be something that feels natural, with all of the awkwardness that accompanies normal teenage love. You've done a great job portraying that here.
| redflame1020 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Oh, that was so sweet! I loved how you integrated kit's love for all things mechanical into the story, it added an extra layer to his character. A really well written peice.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Aw, this was really, really cute! Especially since it now seem dear Diane is never going to let them be together...anyway, good job!