Reviews for Time Bump
Nana56 chapter 7 . 1/18/2010
Wow! Great chapter! Got the bulk of those guys taken care of and now they have to take care of the rest. Maybe they'll have some help? They still have to burn the bone, right? Or was the explosion enough? Hm

Great action in this one, hon. :D

Loved it. :)
sendintheclowns chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
The mine! I love all of the action that takes place down there. Ghosts, dust storms, pursued by bad guys.

Don't leave me in suspense!
jensensgirl3 chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
Those two do find trouble at times, they did try to tell those ppl about what's going to happen. Now they are running to hide again, at least they are out of the tunnel and in a ghost town.

Nice chapter hun, can't wait to see how they get out of this.
vonnie836 chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
Pretty awesome chapter, lots of action. It scared me, for a while I wasn't sure they would get out. But now they are out but not save yet. Hope they will find a place to defend themselves. Hugs, Vonnie
gidgetgal9 chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
Just when you think it's safe to get in the water... poor boys, thought they were done and free! I look forward to more! :0)
mousefiction chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
Great chapter!
vonnie836 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Wow, this is pretty mysterious. I wonder what is happening to Sam. Does it have to do with his psychic powers or is it something else. It definitely is pretty scary. Great story. Hugs, Vonnie
jensensgirl3 chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
Those two boys do find a whole lot of touble, now with Dean being hurt and Sam still feeling the effects of the bones. I hope they can finish the job and leave, giving those ppl the rest and peace they need.

Nice chapter hun can't wait to see how they get out of this.
Nana56 chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
*sighs happily* A very satisfying chapter. Some hurt!Dean, angsty!Sam, both in danger. Yummy, my dear.

I've got to say that I'm really glad that Sam is finally getting warm! I was worried about that boy.

Loving big brother Dean, too.

Nicely done. :)
sendintheclowns chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
Totally cool! Especially the ending, with the brothers realizing they're the bait.

Favorite moments-Dean taking care of Sam at the beginning of the chapter, then Sam taking care of Dean and then Dean letting Sam sleep. This is so what I've missed on the show!

The chapter really came out great. I can't wait to see what you do with the next one.
Sastiel chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
Bait! Huh! I don get it...Sorry.

Cant wait til you update,this stosy is original and awesome! Keep it up!
Leahelisabeth chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
This is very compelling. I am really enjoying this story. Good work!
Maz101 chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
Good job - liked the action; liked injured Dean; love the idea they're bait!
mousefiction chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
Great chapter.

Interesting cliff hanger, as well. I'm curious as to what will happen next.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this; keep up the good work!
Sojourner84 chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I just started reading this story today and already I'm loving the brother moments. Loved Sam flicking peanuts at Dean while he's trying to play poker, all because "It was boring, cold, and his brother had abandoned him for a bunch of sweaty poker-playing goons with questionable hygiene and not a complete set between them. All stupid enough to keep trying to beat Dean at poker." *laugh* Love it. Looking forward to the rest.

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