Reviews for After The Sun Sets
Jenmoon1 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
pretty good usely like sora better on bottom
HienFan chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
For a while there I thought Riku was gonna win that rock paper scissors game(I was cheering for Sora to win since frankly I like those who always seem to bottom on top most of the time) and I CHEERED when Sora won

Thanks for a Riku bottom, Sora top fic they are obscenely rare, just because Riku is taller, older and has white anime hair doesn't mean dom

caledon chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
HOT and steamy YUM XD
fluffy yaoi chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
well... i didnt liked it because riku is NOT a bottom :{ that's just hard to imagine and sora was very OOC. this is just my opinion. don't take it personal.
blazblue-domo chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
KYYYYAAAAA~~~~ SMEXY CUTENESS~ i finished readinh hourglass a few months ago and i effing 3 this story sooooo much XD
KawaiiKilala77 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
It was not atrocious! It was perfect, hot and sweet at the same time. I love reading every bit and I enjoy reading a story where Sora tops Riku, its pretty rare. Again I love it.
Vamwolf1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I can kinda see why you would think sora to be the dominate one, but to be honest I can only picture diku being dominate. Hehe oh well that's not my decision to make anyway. Either way it was beautifully written and I did read hourglass and when I saw that um very well uh blurred sex scene between older sora and riku I was like uhhhh that's it! Noooo I was sooo looking toward to seeing how it would turn put but I loved the story none the less!
June chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I have to admit, it was pretty good! XD Sorry, but I laughed when they did rock paper scissor for dominance... I read all of Hourglass and this did not disapoint!
Paopu Pop chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Sora as a top. Very refreshing! :3 I like Riku as top, but it's really awesome to see a well written Sora-seme. _

I think you did a great job writing a lemon! No awkward language. And the connection between the males was simply beautiful without making them girly xD
sense datum chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Awweh. This was really funny and adorable! 3

And I liked Sora on top, oddly enough. I guess it's all about perspective.

Great job!

-suscribes- :D
xXxKierraxThexOriginalxXx chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Ok im using my actual username cuz i was to lazy to log in... Anyways it would have been agreat story and perfect but...i stopped reading once Sora won the rock paper scissors and was gonna be top cuz im always on the side where riku is on top i tried to switch them in my mind but i just couldnt -shudders- now i have the thought of sora on top and i cant do that its just to...idk riku seems more dom to me srry it was great till sora won the rock paper scissors srry again
mazotori chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Aw XD XD so cute XD XD 3
Ninety-Nine-More chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I liked it allot. Of course my preference is on Riku topping, but you bring up a good point that by the end of the games and your fic he seems more passive and Sora more of a leader. Good job. )
darkriku01 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
this was a good story pretty much had the same feel as hourglass. i liked it alot and it wasn't vulgar as most lemons tend to be. good job!
MrMissMrs Random chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
full blush Gah...bad thoughts...bad thoughts...

Sora and Riku: walk in and see what she was reading faint
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