Reviews for The Wish
Keronshara chapter 1 . 3/4
Errors: The following people died at the beginning of this story but were suddenly alive during the awards ceremony.
Colin Creevey, Terry Boot, plus it was implied that several other D.A. members or students that Harry knew were also killed
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 2/3
Easy. Because of Harry's unselfishness, he got his parents back anyway.
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Bah humbug...

I would have wished for karmic judgment.

Most of the wizzy world does not deserve magic.

They lie, cheat, bribe, murder, mind rape, likely physically rape then obliviate, and more...

JKR has no clue! She did have a great sales staff tho.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Excellent story!
Runecutter chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
What can I say? They got what they deserved. Under the premise of the story even Harry's jerk language seems somewhat justified. But the boy should get some help with anger management anyway O.o
Having the queen there and tell the conspirators off in front of the world was fun too. Why not, if you go full out gala, those things need to be in there. Still, having destiny turn up and shower Harry in the cornucopia of blessings, was definitely jumping the shark. Not cool in the least. The wish was okay, but any appearance of bodily allegories of forces of nature at the climax of a story disqualifies the writing pretty much outright. As part of the setup like the "died too often and gets a last chance" stories, okay it's not much worse than "they all betrayed him from the get go". That's called suspension of disbelief. But as Deus ex Machina at the height of things? Just no.
draco122 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
That was so evil the ending. However I loved it.
Draco122
sugarbabies chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Great short story! You had me mad,sad, and glad, all emotions. I just wished that this wasn't the only story you have! thanks
moonprincess97524 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
I love Harry's revenge on those that wronged him. I do have to say that at the start I thought that George had died because of the collapsed ceiling.
Insanity NPO chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
This one was really amazing. I can't say much more than that.
StupidChinaBook chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
how about lily,james & sirius waiting for harry when he returns.
Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This was good I hope Harry/Fleur happens but there is just too many options to thing about regarding the gift at home.
captainwhiteshadow chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
That was beautiful. I don't see how it was humorous at all, but it was a good dramatic one-shot.
Pyro-Neko-Isis chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Interesting
serenityselena chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
wonderful story with interesting twists _
little-bast chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Fricken awesome just like your others!

My only complaint is they are too short!

Love your fics!
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