Reviews for Konoha under the Red Sun
Shikamaru123456789 chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Hahaa, I haven't seen a lot of good fanfiction lately. This might be some of the best work I've seen so far!

There was only one problem: the quotations.

The way you work it, you write, "Peachy." Said Sakura, "Who are they?"

Really, it's supposed to be... "Peachy," said Sakura. "Who are they?"

Either way, you only did that twice or so. It's not a big deal. Beyond that little detail, I definitely love the story.

I have a favor.

My friend and I started a website and it's all about anime. It has a few episodes of anime, a few fan fictions, and a few fan art. We need to publicize it a little bit, so if you could help, please log onto AnimeStreams.. Tell your friends too! Thanks!

Great story!
Lifestyle chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Hm... an interesting beginning! I'll be waiting to see where this goes; it certainly has possibilities and potential! Keep up the good work :)