|Reviews for Dark Water: The Last Treasures|
| Pleneko chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
I've never been a fan of "screenplay" format, but that's just me so I won't hold it against you. You seem to have a good story planned out, and you're setting it up well. That said, I would recommend proofreading future chapters a little more carefully; you have some minor spelling and grammar issues, nothing major but several little mistakes like that add up quickly.
| Dark Fox Tailz chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I can tell that I'm going to like this story and here's an idea for you to use in later chapters, maybe you could bring that one evil monkey bird Yellow Wing? So him and Niddler can have a few fights with each other through out the story. Because I think he could of somehow got away in that one episode and is now out for revenge!
Please update again soon & thank you.