Great idea for a new story but looking ahead it just seems to follow the original plot from a different angle.

- Hip

hospitable

you keep doing this. what kind of absolute dumbfuck doesn't know the difference between hospitals and hospitable?

Loved this story sm

Aww shit, here we go again.

I hate how much of a weak individual you are making Ron turn out to be, also this chapter and their “reconciliation” sucked ass (like I saw coming) just rubbish.

I know that you’ll fix things in the end (at least I think you will). I’m curious to see how you do that (that would make sense of course) but oh my God this is very stupid.

Dude what the fuck, why was that horrendous tickling incident not discussed in this chapter. Yo this chapter was rubbish, I know you had to put in conflict to relate it to the main story but why, when you’ve changed other things up and why get them together before the main story’s conflict changing the story drastically (which was enjoyable that you got them together earlier) to then have a conflict rise from Ron’s end that makes zero sense to break them up to link it back to the main story only to get them back together in the end. You either follow the main story and get them together during the end of the war or you don’t and make changes on your own but still keeping it related to the main story.

What is this over used nonsense with “the toad” and “the cow”. That shit whack.

What’s this with everyone calling her minoe

Why the hell did you make Neville do that!?

Thank you so much for this fanfic! Great read!

Except for the infinite number of typos, this is an alright story so far. And while I know there aren't actually more typos than words, it feels like it.

One year later... Or 11... Lol

Good fic. It would have been perfect with a bit less Hermione glorification... And making your own plots (that were better than the canon ones).

Hoping you'll write again!

You killed Percy!... I hope you will kill Draco and Snape too...

The Malfoys need to be extinct. Draco never had to survive the war.

As JKR wrote it, the Malfoys did the right thing. The didn't loss any family (while the Weasleys lost 3: Gideon, Fabian and Fred), and after the war, all was forgotten and forgiven... In the end, they even married a Weasley?!... Totally sickening.

Morale? Take the easy, evil path, not the hard right. You will end the same, but without losing anybody.

Mmm... A little mistake. It's Crucio, not curcio.

And, in the books, Draco DID said they were Ron, and Hermione... He didn't do the same with Harry because Hermione had changed his face. Not even Harry reckoned himself when looked into a mirror.