Reviews for Negative One
Dantalions chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
i really liked this alternate character representation of ben.
Calasse chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I'm craving to read what Ben's POV would be like. Nice work.
Daughter of Apollo1217 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
I liked this one because you wrote it really well, but I really didn't like it because I feel like Ben and Kevin should be a happy couple. But that's just my mushiness lol

Much love 3
Art-Of-Escape chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Fuck, I hate Ben so much in this! Rawr!

And poor, poor Kevin.
ShaneT chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
That was so good'! I was surprised. I didn't think that this story would come from kevins view, but it worked out sooo well. Amazing!
Mantinas chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
This was really awesome. Though it's really sad, because we all know that isn't the last time; it never is.
De Ore Leonis chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I don't often encounter sadder, darker fics, but I am pleased when I do. It makes a pleasant change. This fic was dark and it was also very well written. First person can be difficult to keep in character, and despite the unusual situation, I think you have Kevin's voice down pretty well.

I liked the unusual spin on Ben's character too. It seems plausible that the hero thing could wear him down into something less than heroic after time.

I also liked the brief mention of Julie and her words to Kevin. It was a fairly poignant moment. Overall this was an engaging and entertaining read.
yuugi arry chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
wow this was amazing i like no LOVE it...and ben is such a gummybear which makes it all the beter...keep it up
KurtFabulous chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
You've really made me hate Ben now, you know that? Argh, it was really really good, and I love the way you wrote Kevin. And although I hate the way Ben is acting, it really works and fits in with what we know of future ben (before they changed him).

Brilliant and *favourite*
XXXMystery chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
The angst is so good! Evil!Ben(close enough) seems like a real possibility.
RainbowAttack chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Okay, so, you should feel really happy, this is the first review I've ever written because this is the first time I have ever felt a strong need to tell an author how much I admire them. It wasn't exactly the writing that was amazing-not to say the writing was bad, I thought it was executed well, not filled to the brim with details, and not trashing like so many fan-fictions I've read-but I really like how realistic the story is. It's not just another stupid romance where this person loves this person and this person is jealous and evil-ya'know the stories that we can all come up with as children. Your story was much more like the real world (or how I pressive it,)showing that there isn't any love in the world. I'm not sure if this is what you were trying to present, but that's what I saw (or I only saw it because I read this right after I stopped reading this horrible fan-fiction about falling in love after hating a person for years-That's why I don't usually read Draco/Harry fics.)

*Note: I'm really sorry if I sound like a snob/know-it-all. That's not what I'm aiming for, I just want to display my great admiration for someone who isn't just writing for some stupid childish (though some aren't really childish being rated M and all...) fantasy. (Do I sound stupid using large words?)
rahsax chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
-had just watched one of those episodes about them in the future- (it was the one where they both had kids)

I KNOW! it make me go 'WTF' but then again i spent the whole episode laughing about how close they kids going in my mind i was like: 'OMG the kids are having a childhood fling just like there parents' needless to say everyone glared at me.

I laughed even harder when Ben accepted Kevins kid into their family... it made me Rofl louder... again people glared at me more

Back to your righting!

this is really good and i enjoyed reading it (took me longer because people who would get angry at me for reading M stuff walked into the room) but once i DID finish it i found it so cool...

ok... ill be quiet now

From Rahsax
BookerSeeFoodBookerEat chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
This is really, really, really good. I couldn't write something with that much detail :) And I love the story and ... everything basically. I love the whole thing :) It's about time I found some new Bevins.
The Phantomess of the Opera chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
well written! OMFG! kevin, i still love you!