Reviews for Survival of the Fittest
Guest chapter 7 . 10/6
Im pretty sure you meant to say witness not "whiteness" LMFAO

Seriously, you need to edit this. The grammar is horrible.
Katemae Black chapter 45 . 3/14
What happened to the dog?
Guest chapter 43 . 1/19
Based on other booksive read in the same genre the way they act to their boss wouldnt fly.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/18
There she goes again...she is being a brat...she ran off knowing thatthese arent good people...throwing a tantrum and causing a scene...what in the hell is she doing?
Guest chapter 9 . 1/18
How old is Bella? She reminds me of a teenager...grown from being on the street but still childlike and naive.
Rita01tx chapter 44 . 12/27/2018
Woo hoo! Now, if Edward puts a ring on Bella's finger, that makes her family and Carlisle can't touch family, right?
Rita01tx chapter 43 . 12/27/2018
Let's hope Carlisle was tellin' the truth!
Rita01tx chapter 42 . 12/27/2018
Self defense...perfect! The assholes had it comin' but, oh, if Edward finds out it was at Carlisle's orders, all bets are off!
Rita01tx chapter 41 . 12/27/2018
That girl sure does cry a lot! Edward needs to Google "how to grow a backbone" and show her the results!
Rita01tx chapter 40 . 12/27/2018
Oh, things are definitely gettin' out of hand! Edward can't even whack Carlisle, now I think about it! Esme would NOT be pleased that her son snuffed her brother, right?
Rita01tx chapter 39 . 12/27/2018
So much for Laurent not bein' a problem...that now make 4 on Edward's hit list LOL!
Rita01tx chapter 38 . 12/27/2018
A worthy introduction *phew!*
Rita01tx chapter 37 . 12/27/2018
Ooooh, I thought she'd already more or less told him she was a virgin *facepalm!*
Rita01tx chapter 36 . 12/27/2018
Glad to see Edward's parents seein' his softer side because of Bella! Esme was very observant about Bella's issues with her self-doubt!
Rita01tx chapter 35 . 12/27/2018
Bella may feel like she's nothin' and nobody right now but it doesn't have to stay that way! With Edward's support, in every way, she can blossom into whatever she wants!
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