Reviews for When A Heart Breaks
Sara chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
Oh my god, I love it! My friend and I are always "gushing" about JinxMugen so thank you so much for this. I think you have Mugen's character spot on! God, I love him, anyway, good job so far! Will continue reading...
BOOMSTICKZ chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
;_; That was so cute! Holy crap, you made their personalities like PERFECT and amazing! Thank you for the perfection of a Fanfiction!
dat-ass-doe chapter 2 . 3/12/2010
aw, i wish this could be longer... it's just so good! i really do love this story and i really don't want it to finish so quickly... but overall i absolutely loved the first two chapters, looking forward to the last one! just really fantastic job writing this, love mugen's attitude and jin's rationality. wander why fuu is so worried about this... xoxoxoxoxoxo
dat-ass-doe chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
i loved it... that was really good! i am definitely going to read more, i love where this is going... i love how you made mugen and that knot in his stomach from seeing jin. absolutely brilliant! xoxoxoxoxo
Zbbal chapter 3 . 1/13/2010
Good job.
Loren chapter 3 . 11/12/2009
It was WAY AWESOME...yet way short...I wouln't mind waiting for fics this good, so please keep writing, I think you're very good...and MORE JINxMUGEN...there can never bee too much of it in the world...Take care!

LUVZ LOREN 3
Onime no Jashin chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
It was so..sudden! Just like Mugen, haha.
Onime no Jashin chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
Ah, the fight scene was very good. It actually set me on the edge of my seat. -
Onime no Jashin chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Absolutely love it!

You're right, there really aren't many MuJinn stories.

In fact, mostly there's only Fuugen. -_-;
Dragon77 chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
wylkin chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
Very good! I was particularly impressed with the description of the fight scene. :D!

Well done _;
Dragon77 chapter 2 . 9/2/2009
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!
Majestic Masters chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Wheres thet rest of it?
FrankenTart chapter 2 . 8/19/2009
Such emotion! I haven't read a MugenxJin fanfic in awhile, but I made the right choice in choosing this one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
tinkinama chapter 2 . 8/16/2009
I liked it! Your fight scene was good too. Actually you gave me some ideas. Thanks!
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