|Reviews for Ben 10 AF Universal Part 1: One Freaky Experiance|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
| spiderwriters chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
This is a good story. But can't you work on all your stories in turnes. I mean we haven't met freakazoid yet
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
| DaniellePhantom chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I love this story! Freakazoid and Ben 10 are Awesome, and the plot device of getting pulled into an alternate universe is always good. I would suggest studing the characters' speech patterns. You are doing a wonderful job already, but I bet you could become even more amazing! Strive for your potential, No matter how good you get, you can always become even better, that's one of the wonderful things about life and writing! You have golden potential and a bright future as a writer, go for it! I'm rooting for you!
| Brandon chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Hello if your looking for alternate dimension Ideals I say you should mix and match the characters of Ben 10 and do alternate endings to the episodes from both the series.
| northstarr chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
This is the most awesome story I have ever read I can't wait for the