Waugh, lovely snapshot. Poor guy. D:

(stray 'as' in the first paragraph there)

I love this couple! This is a genius story! Well-written and great plot! It made me sad for a moment though.

You've captured them both perfectly- love it x

I must say this story really surprised me at the end, i felt really sad for Tommy :/ and you made him quite cute and endearing. Good story :D