|Reviews for Broken Soles|
| gone1.gone2.gone3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
he didnt even say sorry for hitting her lol...update soon! u cant stop there!
| areilya16 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
AW POOR JAKE, THATS REALLY SAD THAT BILLY DIED I
ALMOST CRIED WHEN I READ IT
| underworldfan chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I loved it! It almost made me cry it was so good!
| Lalait chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Found this through "you're worth following"
A bit too violent for my vision of Jacob, would have been fine with the push but the punching and broken nose was a bit too much (it scared me!). Still, it was well written and left me wanting to read more story from you at the end. I do have a taste for a bad tempered Jacob and you write it well. :)
| Jacobleah chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Very intense and violent but really well written & so heartbreaking. Really great job on your first fan fic ! Congratulations..
| hiits a great fic chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
aww... u need to make this into s tory
| TheVividTruth chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
This was sweet.
You should consider writing another chapter
| Kei Jones chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Wow, that was really intense. I'm surprised the pack let Leah go by herself knowing that when Jacob is angry he has a tendency to lash out. Proof is right before Jacob breaks away from Sam's pack he lunges at Leah but is stopped by Sam. Nice story.
| hgmsnoopy chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Billy's gone, that's so sad...
Great start, this is a really emotional start to your story and I look forward to where you will take this. Update soon!
| Psychokillerhoney chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Wow. Awesome chapter. Im really curious how this story will develop.
| 2013as chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
great start! update soon :)
| VividInk chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Definitely a different beginning. I'm keen to see where this goes. UPDATE
| lionandthelamblove7 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
WOW. Wasn't sure as to what he was going to do when Leah informed him about Billy, but I sure as hell wasn't expecting THAT! It was so good! Love this story already and can't wait for the chapters to come.
| Nikik chapter 1 . 8/12/2009