Reviews for The Girl Who Lived Forever
Patrick Nelson chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Very intriguing would love to know the rest
Toadstoole chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Keep's great
E chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
this sounds interesting so far. keep writing!
Isabel chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Wow. I absolutely loved your ending. That was my favorite part of the whole story, because it adds mystery yet satisfies the reader in a content way. Please continue writing!
Lady Hawk Wind chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Update the story! I want to know more! You can't do that, it's so unfair! You explain the prelude (prologue) then stop! That's cheating...sort of. It's cheating us out of the awesomeness of your story! Finish it!
Raffels chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Very interesting. Pls write more.
Lina Girl chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Hey that was actually pretty good. :)

You should continue it.
Irene chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
this is a good story. you may start writting on it... but i think you need more unique and interesting points...
savanah chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
ack! why did you stop writing? that's so good! hurry back to you computer and type up the rest! i'm dying here!

ducky's review chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
that was soo good!

write the next so i'm not in pain!