|Reviews for begrudged|
| VampireYouth chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Damn, what a way to end a story. I generally need my happy ending, even in an angsty story, but this ending seemed to fit perfectly with the tone of the story. Great job.
| carebear309 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Loved it! Thanks to the auction winner for allowing us to read it as well.
Can't wait to read your next project!
| edwardemmett09 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Oh no! I am sad it's over! But it was an awesome story and you ended it very well. I loved reading it! Thanks for a great fic and I'll be reading whatever you write in the future!
| austen1775 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
That's a sad ending. Jacob sucks for making sure that Bella and Edward will not be completely happy. I must say, though, that ensuring his death in Edwards's hard is somewhat ingenious and evil.
I still hope that Edward and Bella get their happy ever after in the future when Jacob is nothing but a mere distant memory.
| Nicoconsd chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Wow, not sure if I want to smack you or hug you but damn that was an amazing ending to a great story! cheers!
| teenlee chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
oh wow... that was a really good story.
I really enjoyed reading it:)
| b3j02 chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Oh my goodness! That was awesome! It was also sad. It lived up to it's name. I hope WolvesandVamps enjoyed it as much as I did. I loved all of your twists and turns and all of the different things that your characters went through. Great job ladies! Have a great weekend! Happy Halloween too!
| BlindLittleRain chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Most depressing, angst, emotionally screwed up story I have ever read.
| readingmama chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Well isn't Jacob a clever little pup. I guess Edward will have to live with it but once Bella is changed she will forget eventually so his plan wasn't perfect.
Great story, the idea was taken in a different way then I expected.
| b3j02 chapter 14 . 10/31/2009
This is soo good! I will review more in the next chapter...
| latuacantante4him chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Wow! I can't decide if am sad or not. Everyone got what they wanted but in a sad way. Enjoyed this story. :)
| FuzzyWuzzyWithBadHaircut chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Faboulous Ending. Loved it! Tragic and totally impossible to predict. Great job.
| shaz308 chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
rather twisted ending. Thanks for the story. Look forward to more of your work.
| random anon891 chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
"This was more a tale of me and Edward and Jacob. Jacob, who left us begrudged for eternity."
I never thought I'd be crying over Jacob! Ever! You both are amazing writers but when you get together you truly make magic. I adore this story, it's opened up an entire new outlook on imprinting for me and was just heart-breakingly beautiful. Thank you Jandco and WTVOC for donating your time to an amazing cause and sharing your writing with us. *runs off to make a very strong drink and drown her sorrows* 3
| random anon891 chapter 14 . 10/31/2009
Good God ladies are you trying to kill me? That was intense! That was amazing! I'd copy a few of my favorite lines, but I'm afraid it would be almost the whole chapter. 3