Reviews for begrudged
greeneyedgirly chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
Wow...probably the most intense thing I've ever read before...that's just crazy as shit b/c this whole damn story is intense as fuck!
LaViePastiche chapter 15 . 11/2/2009
jesus, that was pretty angsty. i loved it though - very good job with the AU ladies. i officially feel really bad for jake, and yet, there's something insanely romantic about it all.

the end left me rather depressed, but in a cool way. YKWIM?

powerful stuff.
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 15 . 11/2/2009
WOW, this story was insane! lol.

I mean, what an idea!

Jake imprinting on Bella, Bella having love at first sight with Edward, and Edward killing Jake...

Like one big vicious circle...

In the end though, it was a painfully brilliant.

All i can say to wolvesnvamps is that, wow, what a great way to support a cause...

Thankyou for this story : )
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
I freaking love this story.
sophie921 chapter 15 . 11/2/2009
That was an amazing ending...never saw it coming like that. Masterful.
ArielleKrystene chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Wow. I really don't know what else to say. Simply amazing.

Cullenary chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
ew! that was such a great story! you are a great writer-I hope it gives you as much joy and fun as it gives us, your readers! thanks for sharing your talent! Its been my lucky pleasure to have found you here! xoxoxoxoxo
Jessica0306 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Dare I say I feel a bit sad for the poor mutt Jacob? This was really great. It showed how there really was no choice at all, which I always felt was a major theme in the original saga. I love your words.
booknerd323 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Great story. I never saw that coming.
eli-dunbigboot chapter 3 . 11/1/2009
OK, so someone tweeted that Begrudged has been completed, and so here I am - hopping on the bandwagon!

Don't count on many reviews from me, I've got a feeling that this will be a compulsive readathon!

Loving it so far,

Orions-eyes chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
I'm sad that it's over. Wow - quite the ending. Not the HEA I usually prefer, but one that fits this story perfectly. I'll be looking forward to your next joint project.
LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
was totally not expecting that
Orions-eyes chapter 14 . 11/1/2009
Lately I've been a little blah about fanfiction, but everytime I see an update notice for this story, I get so excited. Thanks for the brilliant writing - you guys are fabulous!
curly-kitty chapter 15 . 11/1/2009

I couldn't see a way to a truly happy ending in this story and I guess I'm glad to see that I was right. We all love being right, huh?

Great story and a lot to think about.
o hale no chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
The same review I left for Jandco...

I'm left speechless. It was heartbreaking. It was perfect.

Thank you Jandco. Thank you WTVOC. And especially thanks to Wolvesnvamps for her generosity.
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