Reviews for begrudged
EeWee chapter 15 . 10/10/2014
Wow, that was a really different take on the Edward Bella need for each other. I liked it though. So well written. Not a Jacob lover, so I liked that Edward ended him. Good story.
mommymac0508 chapter 15 . 10/5/2014
Wow there is no happy ending and jake made it so poor bella
Robward17 chapter 15 . 10/2/2014
Wow. Excellent story and new perspective on imprinting. Not such a romantic notion after all.
Sailaranel chapter 15 . 10/14/2013
Very interesting ending, I liked it.
Different in how jake deals with it, and leaves Bella with it to cope with.
Very enjoyable reading.
dbpbatm chapter 15 . 10/9/2013
Good story! Thank you for sharing it.
jdc0630 chapter 15 . 9/7/2013
THIS was very good. A sad story of imprinting that just shouldn't have been.
But the thoughts of you leaving them with having to live with their end results...
for ALL ETERNITY. That's sad. How is there suppose to be any kind of HEA for
E/B in the end.

Thanks muches for sharing your story with me.

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
muffinmom chapter 15 . 8/26/2013
Fabulous story! Thanks for sharing!
mauigirl60 chapter 15 . 7/24/2013
This story is seriously under-reviewed for such a great piece of literary work. Clean, crisp and snappy dialogue; a romantic different-kind-of-vamp Edward. I loved your take on the whole imprint thing. It was never explained that the imprintee imprints back on the imprinter...wait, did that make any sense? LOL I often wondered about that. I felt sorry for Jacob but I'm an Edward fan all the way. Very crafty of you to have Jacob do what he did but I think, in time, the memories will fade for Bella and Edward. Great job, thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story! xox
Nannyjojo chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
Fairwell Jacob, can't say I shall morn the loss.

Loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
Nannyjojo chapter 14 . 7/3/2013
Wow.
Nannyjojo chapter 13 . 7/3/2013
He'll get over it.
So she has made her choice regardless of what he has done.
Looking forward to more
Nannyjojo chapter 12 . 7/3/2013
Here comes the moment of truth.
Nannyjojo chapter 11 . 7/3/2013
Well she can try and deny it all she wants, but yeah she does want him.
Nannyjojo chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
No, you are not supposed to run, stupid vampire.
Nannyjojo chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
Oh dear. Jacob really isn't pleased.
Never mind.
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