Reviews for begrudged
mauigirl60 chapter 15 . 7/24/2013
This story is seriously under-reviewed for such a great piece of literary work. Clean, crisp and snappy dialogue; a romantic different-kind-of-vamp Edward. I loved your take on the whole imprint thing. It was never explained that the imprintee imprints back on the imprinter...wait, did that make any sense? LOL I often wondered about that. I felt sorry for Jacob but I'm an Edward fan all the way. Very crafty of you to have Jacob do what he did but I think, in time, the memories will fade for Bella and Edward. Great job, thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story! xox
Nannyjojo chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
Fairwell Jacob, can't say I shall morn the loss.

Loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
Nannyjojo chapter 14 . 7/3/2013
Wow.
Nannyjojo chapter 13 . 7/3/2013
He'll get over it.
So she has made her choice regardless of what he has done.
Looking forward to more
Nannyjojo chapter 12 . 7/3/2013
Here comes the moment of truth.
Nannyjojo chapter 11 . 7/3/2013
Well she can try and deny it all she wants, but yeah she does want him.
Nannyjojo chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
No, you are not supposed to run, stupid vampire.
Nannyjojo chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
Oh dear. Jacob really isn't pleased.
Never mind.
Nannyjojo chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
He is sure pushing the boundaries.
But go Edward, I am up for anything that pushes the buttons of Jacob's buttons
Nannyjojo chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
Hell yeah, in my world too.
Nannyjojo chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
They just seem to be thrown into each others paths all the time.
Talk about pushing boundaries.
Nannyjojo chapter 5 . 7/3/2013
Oh Jacob lighten up.
What you so worried about.
If he wanted to kill her he would have done it before you even entered the store.
Nannyjojo chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
Oh he has it bad
Nannyjojo chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
Uh oh Bella.
Is this really why Jacob doesn't want Bella out of his sight so to speak? Did he lie about the imprinting, or is Bella really rejecting it for her soul mate?
Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Interesting.
So they have now met.
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