|Reviews for begrudged|
| XxTwilight CrystalxX chapter 15 . 8/13/2011
Holy crap! I so did not see that ending happening. Very well written. WOW. I'm just completely thrown. I don't even know how to put into words how great this story was. Awesome job and I'll being looking forward to more from you!
| butzi chapter 15 . 7/27/2011
Oh gosh, the ending was intense. Good story, I liked it.
| BlueRyuu chapter 15 . 7/6/2011
well, i can't say it was the angsty-est thing i have ever read, but i did so enjoy the plot :) it was odd not seeing any filler, but a bit refreshing. i've never been a team jacob, but i can't help but weep for him :(
| Liz Ben chapter 15 . 6/11/2011
wow. that is so dark, a perfectly tragic story. now i will have to read some fluff to get me out of this funk... but I'm sure glad i read this. thanks for the tale.
| angelicmethod chapter 15 . 6/10/2011
Holy. Crap! I don't even know where to start... Though I am team Jacob, this story just... Wow! All of your stories are amazing and I am just in awe of the skills and talents in your writing!
| kmfroggi chapter 15 . 4/20/2011
wow...wow...wow! a-m-a-z-i-n-g! i have now words, but like someone else said...there arent that many good vampire stories around anymore, but this one was fantastic!
| allbookedup chapter 15 . 3/11/2011
withthevamps, terrific story...the ultimate tragedy.
Best, Ann in SC
| allbookedup chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
withthevamps, this is excellent. Can't wait to get to the next chapter...
Best, Ann in SC
| secretobsession7 chapter 15 . 3/10/2011
Wow, I loved the story from start to finish!
| JGR17 chapter 15 . 3/8/2011
I loved this story! Dark and twisty...perfect!
| RobPattinsonLover13 chapter 15 . 3/5/2011
Wow...thats depressing...this story is a great one thats for sure, i will be honest it was a little hard to falow there near the end, but i understand your point. No one won, Jake might have been the smartes, but he still lost in death, Bella will never forget Jake, and Edward will have to live with the guilt of killing his love's love. sad but very true, posible in a less mithacal way.
| loulouau chapter 15 . 2/14/2011
rec from cullen boys and really pleased with the story great read
| KazM77 chapter 14 . 2/13/2011
Yep definitely a compliment, I've read quite a few similar love triangle stories and yers was different in a good way :D
| KazM77 chapter 15 . 2/12/2011
Different take on the Bella, Edward, Jacob love triangle. Well written.
| Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 15 . 2/6/2011
Its like opposite land. I just kept thinking of Eclipse in this. Loved thinking about how much differently it would have been (was) when Edward thought he had to give up Bella to Jacob. Even though she was his only chance at love as well. Wonderfully IC the difference. We had a bit of a different Edward here which also made sense...Jake was crazy IC.
And it really makes so much sense. Imprinting there's no choice for the wolf, and it was made sort of clear to us throughout the series that vampire mating is more no choice for either party.
I'm so glad I finally read this. The whole "hardcore angst" thing kept stopping me. Then I read what it was about...how could I not. What a great idea. I loved it.