|Reviews for begrudged|
| amanda4242 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
"Between the dark, the lull of the lapping water, and Jake’s hot skin, I started to doze in and out of sleep, warm and secure…and it was these times.
If I could live forever in one moment—it would be right then."
These lines are just beautiful. I got a sense of calm and peace...before the storm hits. Can't wait to keep reading.
| WhoDatWTF chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I'm gonna try to be good and keep up on this fic, because I'm so hooked already. And as a part of that, I figured, the heck with it. I'll review on both of your accounts!
I love the idea of trumping imprinting. I love how you're writing some AU...and I'm excited because I've been looking into reading more of it agian anyway!
And, of course, I love you guys...and the angst! Hooray!
Oh yeah and I love wolvesnvamps too, for being so awesome.
Looking forward to seeing these guys all ripped apart and slowly put back together again (I hope)!
| furious kitten chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Wow, you've been quite the busy bee recently! Definitely intriguing! Can't wait to see more )
| ItzMegan73 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
yeah...this is al I need...another WONDERFUL story on my list!
| fergi81 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Looking good, I haven't read a Bella w/wolves angle before so this looks to be interesting...
| Breaking.Down.Slowly chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Gah! B/J coupling. Badness. But...I sat through News to Me despite all the B/Jness. I can handle this. I think. And HL5 has lots of heartfail, so that'll keep me warmed up for this story...I hope.
| atypical-swan chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Interesting set up. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
| bluemoonbebe chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Holy. Shit. Holyshitholyshitholyshit. I'm gonna LOVE this.
| Bratty-Vamp chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Can I also send love to wolvesnvamps?
I am so flipping exicted to read this new project by you two. My seat belt is buckled. Bring. it.
| Luree chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I'm already hooked. I must say that anything written by the two of you will be simply amazing, and I can't wait to read more!
And I love the symbolism of Bella in the cold water, and wanting to stay in it for longer, even though she shouldn't want to...very nice.
| nightmare1991 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Oh! I love where this is and I can't wait to see where it's going! :D
From the looks of it... Jacob's imprinted on Bella! *gasp* But she's still going to fall in love with Edward! *double gasp* That $# %! (- total jk there, btw... ;D) One man not enough for her? *raises eyebrow incredulously* Goodness! I'd take half of either one of them in a heartbeat, and she... *trails off, rambling incessantly*
But I guess that's the whole "everything you've heard about love is a lie" bit, ehh... Sneaky, sneaky... I LIKE (love) it! :D Bring on the drama! Can't wait to read “the angstiest thing I’ve ever read." lol
| bitemealready chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
wow that was seriously amazing. kinda sweet and odd. but very nicley done.
| steph1068 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
yay - i'm so excited! sign me up for the angst!
thank you wolvesandvamps, for sharing with everyone.
and thanks, jandco and wtvoc for writing. always a pleasure.
| OH MIA MYA chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I like it. Can't wait for more
Waiting Patiently Impatiently
| booksickle chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
"The shock of being submerged in extreme cold from extreme heat was almost excruciating—it hurt and made me ache…but in an odd, inexplicable way, I almost welcomed the change."
(and the rest of that scene)
Oh, how cleverly you finagle in the foreshadowing.