Reviews for Birthday Wish
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2015
Aww, Hao's so sweet! Loved it
Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I like this, it's extremely original.
I like how you described Anna's reishi and the others showing up at the restaurant and how Hao wanted to add to their guilt. What people will do out of fear... Well, this was well written and you nailed all their personalities!
So in short, amazing! :)
airwad chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
That was so sad!
Great job! This is the first shaman king fan-fiction that I've read and it's REALLY good :)
simplyhappy8 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This story has been in my favorites for a while but I forgot to review it! This is one of my favorite stories ever, and you are an amazing writer. It wasn't until the end that I realized that I was clenching my teeth the whole time because I was feeling so sad:( but it's a really sweet story and I wish there was more like this one :)
princessfrankie chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Aww! This story is such a sweet piece of brotherly fluff! I Love it! You did a great job writing it as you managed to keep Hao mostly in character while at the same time exposing his more protective side, and as I myself am disabled, I can tell you that you also you did a great job of capturing how it feels to be disabled person in regular society. I congratulate you on a story well written. This story is going straight in my favourites. I wish there were more like this!
Hazelle.X chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
oh wow. this is really awesome! seriously! you're really really good! i felt so sad when i realised that the others even wanted to kill yoh, even anna! sadsad. but i really love the brotherly bonds between yoh and hao. you expressed everything out really well i really enjoyed your fic! thanks so much!

mangachick1 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I think you did i really good job! I absoloutely loved this! It's a good way of looking at it and i someway i wish this happened instead of the acctual ending! GOOD JOB!
My Solitude chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
How interesting. I like this story. I especially like the bond between brothers. It's sweet.
x Kagami x chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
That was so sad! But sweet too! I really loved it! T_T Poor Yoh... Betrayed... Blind... Paraplegic... Poor him! At least, he has his brother.
kandra chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
This is beautiful I loved it all the way. How gentle but furious it becomes. I would really love to read a story like that, where Hao and Yoh reincarnate to live together. Thank you for writing this!
sagemode184562 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
that was a real tearjerker, i was so sad, i almost leaked a tear( that was a really good fanfic)
GoblinChildJr chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
really well written! I could really feel all the emotions the characters felt.
Nightglider-star chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I adore Yoh Anna, but I still adored this story. Brilliant job 3
complicatedmind21 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
this story really makes me sad...

I can't imagine Yoh's friends betraying him...

specially Anna...

And my heart broke when Yoh said "It still hurts..."

I envy your way of writing...
RavenAK chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
You were so mean to Yoh TwT but it was beautifully written and like I already said, it really moved me, it was just so full of emotions and amazing. TwT

-sobs some more-
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