Reviews for Lost and Gained
Kasey Jones chapter 23 . 11/28/2016
Okay, I know I am late reading this and hopefully you were really young when you wrote this. It's good but unbelievable, seriously I'm sorry but he is a doctor but knows but knows nothing about pregnancy and has never read a book.
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 11 . 11/10/2016
Wait why is she quitting her job while pregnant? Doesn't she need the money and healthcare?
ConquerAndEnslave chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Grammar could use some work, and I absolutely detest the fact that Bella (once again) has completely fallen apart because she was dumped, it's not the end of the world girly, move on.
Isabella Jame Swan Cullen chapter 45 . 3/8/2015
This was an amazing story! So sweet and beautiful! I loved every moment of it! Incredible job!

Isabella Jame Swan Cullen XxX
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
A Little too dramatic
InLuvWithMusic chapter 45 . 10/20/2014
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! I LOVE THIS STORY SO FREAKING MUCH! :D I have been completely and totally addicted to this story ever since I started reading it... like 18 hours ago! I love the way you write. It just makes the story sound so real, like you're talking to a best friend, no writing a story, and I love it! Keep writing! :) #NewFavoriteAuthor
Guest chapter 45 . 4/4/2013
Awwww great story you should make a part 2! Is Edward a good father? Maybe marriage for Bella and Edward in the future? What about Jacob?
Guest chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
Sorry, I really want to continue reading the story, it seems good. But the writing mistakes are so frequent and horrible that I can't take it anymore, and I'm not even a native-English speaker
Maria chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Loved it! a little more descriptive in the love scene would have been perfect.
BellaTwilightRocks chapter 45 . 12/23/2012
this story is sooooooo fabulous ! I love it! You have such a writting skill! Continue writting, anything! You've got talent!
Scattycow chapter 6 . 12/18/2012
Sorry but this idiot allowed this to carry on so deserved everything she got! What a pathetic loser! I would have cheated on her too. Why not? She wouldn't have ever done anything about it!
Scattycow chapter 5 . 12/18/2012
Ewww! Skanky!
Scattycow chapter 4 . 12/18/2012
This has surely got to be the most pathetic Bella I've ever read on this site! She just allowed herself to be treated like a c**t by Jacob? No wonder he f**ked around on her, there were no consequences for him. She just allowed it. What a loser!
You have a pretty strange writing style. Is English perhaps not your first language. I'm not being rude I just have a litle trouble understanding your prose sometimes.
Scattycow chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Why would she confiscate watches?
sarah chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
When you said they dressed like black men, it was offensive even though you said 'no offense'. Not all black men dress like you described. You could have said that they dressed like gangsters. Just letting you know.
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