Reviews for Angel from the Dark
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Love the horror side of Gaara
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 38 . 6/21/2014
Im not exactly sure what to think about it.
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 37 . 6/21/2014
Hmmm my thoughts on this story... I think that at first it had needed some work done to it , the errors were minor but they were spread out in the beginning of the story but as the story progressed the errors disappeared. So my overall thoughts on this story are pretty good.
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 36 . 6/21/2014
...Oh my god... that was so fucking sad... it had me literally crying... good job
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 35 . 6/21/2014
!
I had to cover my mouth from screaming out "shit" and in the process dropped the tablet on my face because I had the same reaction as sakura.
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 34 . 6/21/2014
This bob giving Hidan the sacrifice ideas are GENIUS!
0beautifuldestruction0 chapter 20 . 6/21/2014
Im not sure when you wrote that last little bit of the description but it is in need of editing but the plot is so much more amazing to me that I am skimming over the here and there errors, (sorry if this review didn't make any sense to you)
Guest chapter 17 . 5/3/2014
3 words...
WHAT.
THE.
HECK!?
...
Its...um...*blush* O-okay...I'm a girl...*blush*
...
Really I feel unconformable...
*blush*
KIRAXKHOAS chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
Kool I like what sakura was wearing not trying to label. (but believe me seriously not kuz im emo)but she sounds kinda emo
xx kaaat chapter 38 . 3/31/2013
*Sigh* After reading this story for the forth time, it still makes me cry like a baby. I remember when I found this story a few years back. It's still my number one favorite on Fan Fiction. Still gives me those cold, shattered feelings. Thank you once again for a good read.
Time to go read Light After Dark now. ;)
-kat
Kaya Kazaki chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
Two tips, for you, my fellow author:
1. When you're about to write in when someone speaks, start a new paragraph all together. Same thing with thoughts.
ex. "Is that supposed to be funny?" Sasuke droned. Sakura stuck her tongue out at him and turned her back on the raven-haired boy.
"Well, with you're impaired sense of humor, I guess not,"

2. When you write out thoughts, italicize them, so we know it's not normal speech.
:) I hope this helps
xCrysi chapter 38 . 10/13/2012
I'm not sure how this story got 200 some reviews, because it was honestly the worst Romance story ever. Like, Sakura and Gaara interacted less than 10 times, they never even had sex (SO WHY IS THIS RATED M?). You don't even say sex in this, you say intercourse once, and the only thing they ever really did was KISS, and not even in bad places, just neck and lips. Honestly? Horrible.

I mean, I'd be okay with a non-sex story, but it shouldn't be rated M then. And there should've been a TON more interaction between them. OMG IVE KISSED YOU TWICE AND NOW I LOVE YOU, then he strangles her? Ooookay... You didn't even explain what was going on with him.

I don't mean to flame, but I find myself really disappointed in this story.
acetwolf94 chapter 37 . 4/19/2012
I love it. I can't wait to read the sequel! ;)
xx kaaat chapter 37 . 3/25/2012
This is officially my favorite story on FanFiction. I love love love it, and I'm so ready to read the sequel. :P
xx kaaat chapter 8 . 3/23/2012
love love love love.
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