|Reviews for Ring Pops|
| Azurela chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
Nah not corny. It was pretty adorable actually (:
I laughed so hard when little Roxas married Axel for a cherry ring pop xD; I think you captured their ages very well, as kids.
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
It's really great! I love the whole ring-pop wedding concept. It's not too mushy or too serious... an awesome one-shot
| Stormdragon6 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Must take a deep breath for my long-ass review *gaaaaaassp*
Well hey, I'm that girl on tumblr who said I would be reviewing your lovely specimens of AkuRoku in the near future OuO I took my sweet time getting here because at the time I sent you that message, I had only barely started to watch Youtube walkthroughs of the games (my new television doesn't show colors when I plug in the PS2, and I don't want to play such a powerful and bright game colorless, so...) and just last night, at roughly midnight, I started the videos for KH2 and reached the part where Axel and Roxas actually begin to interact. So I was waiting until I actually had seen and understood the characters myself before I really got into the fandom and could appreciate them. But now, I can finally start!*
When I first saw your profile, this is the story(-summary) I latched onto first, because unrealistic though they may be, happy romance stories with sugar-sweet endings are what I adore, and judging by the content and count of the reviews for it, I knew I'd find a lovely, sweet piece of writing when I finally got here. So I was superomgexcited to finally read this...in my university library. I chose a corner desk so I could hide my ridiculous smiles when they would inevitably come. And they came QUICK. How can I not explode with big fat smiles when an six-year-old Roxas is saying "when's it my turn on the swiiiing". I was already full-up on Teh Adorbs when Kairi proposed a wedding between the two best buds. And all their kiddy ways of discussing marriage and organizing the wedding were so, so precious and indeed kiddish.
You claimed to have trouble writing dialogue for children who were under ten but you did just fine, girl. Better than fine, what am I saying! It reminded me of my own elementary school days, of course. I can't remember them too well, but for my best friend and I always talking about or pretending we were Pokemon and walking around chatting on the blacktop; for some reason we hardly ever went to the bright and awesome playset that was right next to it. Um anyway, reminiscing over. Again, I really, really liked how the kids were handling the wedding (and the fact that literally everyone was in support of it. Aw, kids. Heart heart heart). such as how Kairi said, "Go find Demyx! He'll get the rings!" like this eight-year-old kid is already a well-established ring procurer or something, lol. That might be my favorite bit. I also wonder if Marluxia, obviously having grown up into a very serious and cool man, hates his friends whenever they bring up his flamboyant and loud childhood persona; they'd be like, "Sooo Marluxia remember when you were a flower girl for that third grade wedding, that was so sweet you pretty princess, you." u
Aaahhmygod this review is the size of Lake Erie and I'm not even into their adulthood yet whatever whatever imma keep going. Do I need to describe my level of fangirlism when they had their little wedding kiss? I guess I wasn't visibly flailing or anything, but I was still glad no one in the library could see me. I like how Axel was the one to do it and yet he was still nervous and almost MISSED X) That silly principal surely had no clue that a legit wedding was going on on the other side of the playground, and that it would actually come to fruition years later.
And in fact years later the relationship only got even more excellent and they are indeed an inseparable pair, so much so that they effortlessly call themselves lovers AND best friends (DO YOU SEE MY INNER FANGIRL SLAMMING INTO THE WALL RIGHT NOW I LOVE THE COMBO OF LOVERS AND BEST FRIENDS IT MEANS SUPER HAPPY, IN-LOVE COUPLES ASDFGHKL;BLARGH) calming down now okay let's do our breathing exercises in out in out, deep breaths, okay.
...so I like how Axel is always clinging to Roxas c: I feel kind of embarrassed using the terms "seme" and "uke" since recently I saw people bashing them for being stupid and unrealistic but here I go anyway: I do absolutely love when a seme loves his uke so much that he clings and is always hugging or at least touching him, holding hands or something. And their comments on the sunset reminds me of some scenes in the games that I've seen in screenshots and am excited to finally see for myself pretty soon And the lemon scene right after, heeheehee
And Axel has a history of making sure he's never hurting Roxas during sex. Be still, my heart c:
And of course the fact that Axel began his proposal with the Ring Pops...
And he calls him Roxie all the time, which no one else does...
But for that one serious moment, he said "Roxas"...
And they NUZZLED at the end; I think nuzzling is the most adorable thing...
Be still. MY. HEART. QAQ
And I'll end my review here because it is officially the size of Europe and some people may have died of exhaustion trying to read it. Don't worry, it's all over! I'll drag my fangirl self to another story of yours sometime soon! Goodbye and thank you for this sweet-and-loving-and-corny-but-I-also-don't-give-a-flying-fuck story. Till later!
| Bubble Bubbler chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Aw gawd that was so cuuuute!
I'm giggling like an idiot!
So well written and I feel a cavity coming on!
And screw the people who thinks this is corny! Sometimes cornyness is just perfect!
Oh and Ring Pops are DELICIOUS!
| nightmares-turn-to-dreams chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
awwwwwwww I loved it. it reminded me of what me and my cousin had done...well only he is my cousin so i would never really marry him. but anyway the story made me laugh and it was so cute.
| this-account-'s-very-dead chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
aw this is so cute.
| Lady Fire.1125 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
the play ground part of this story was too cute X3
| Captain Isa Von Pickles chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
KYAAAAA! Dude, my inner Yaoi fangirl is freaking out right now! I actually squealed a bit at the cuteness! The ending was so adorable, I actually started crying a bit. Gah, I must sound like I'm gushing at the moment, but as you said, "I personally don't give a flying fuck." XD
| chocomiiillk13 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
aww this story is soo cutee. I love the idea of a ring pop wedding .D
| sheepykitty chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
OAO one of the most adorable akuroku fics i've ever read. OAO i LOVED it. 3 3 3
| Andrew Marie chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I liked it a lot. It was very sweet. I also never get to see Axel propose to Roxas so that made it even more enjoyable. So I hope you keep on writing and I shall add you to see what you might come up with. :)
| Supermandy chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
This was so cute it caused me physical pain.
I think my uterus fell out or something...
I LOVE IT! 3
| Creperie chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
That was so cute!
I love ring pops...though, cherry is not my favorite flavour. D
| littlen00bgyn chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Yeah... I only read a few sentences of this. "This is the way you handle quoted statements," said Casper.
"This is not," She continued.
*is a grammar Nazi*
Sorry I'm so picky :(
| Conrii chapter 1 . 3/4/2010