|Reviews for The Whirlwind of Time|
| petros308 chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
There isn't a whole lot of fan ficfor this seris and this was a good story. I felt for both of them. you left off the second time he did so.
| azerjaban chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
*gasp* WOW amazing, I was so excited to see a codex fanfic! I guess its safe now that Jims on the last book. This was written amazingly fit the story perfectly! I love how you wrote Septimus- he sounded almost exactly like Tavi.
Maybe you'll take a crack at the death of the Princeps? *nudge nudge wink wink*
| Advent of Shadows chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I have to thank you dearly for writing in this category. I was sad when Codex Alera did not even have a place on this site. It is still saddening that there are only two stories under it, including this one. I hope to see this piece of work continue. While I do not read anything with less than a T rating normally, I truly enjoyed this. It is hard to compare to the great Jim Butcher's writing, but you did very well for fan fiction. Great job, keep up the good work.
| Musafreen chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Codex Alera! And about time too. I'm SO glad someone's writing on this.
Beautifully charcterized and it was longer.
| wish i c0uld chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
That was really good! I thought you captured the essence(sp?) of Septimus and Araris VERY well.
I'm so glad that someone finally posted something for the Codex Alera. I was actually the one who asked them to add it to the list a while ago because I was planning to post something, but I ended up postponing it indefinitely. But YAY! maybe now that people see that its up they'll start writing stories for it. Try to spread the word. I would love to se more CA fics up here!
| BreathOfNocte chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Beautifully written, wich acute attention to the preset character's personalities and tendancies. Araris has always been one of my favorite characters anyways. :) Jim Butcher does not get nearly enough love around here, and it's nice to see that the attention he does get is high quality. Wonderful job - keep it up!
| Blr chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
So I started out thinking, "Hmm. Let's see how great this goes," in a very sarcastic voice. Within just a few paragraphs, I was utterly thrilled, and was disappointed when it ended so soon. This was very well written, it kept very true to the characters, and was a thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it.
| mexican-girl246 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
first of all i LOVED IT! from what i what i read you really got the characters :) Second of all congrats on being the first person to post fanfiction for Codex Alera a totally awesome series by the wonderful author Jim Butcher. _ and finally have you heard, read, or seen anything concerning First Lord's Fury? I'm dieing to find out any info on it.