|Reviews for A Death in the Family|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
Why did you stop writing? It was really good! It was a little opinionated, and there was a little to much background in the second Chapter, but I really like this! You should keep writing!
| Drac39 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
I like it well enough. It's a start for sure. My only real suggestion is that Jed Lelands' relationship with Kane deteoriates over time and it seems that the hinting is at the top.
| Spiders Wearing Tiny Hats chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I was hoping for Citizen Kane fanfic and I am so happy that you wrote this! Both Kane and Leland are very much in character and you kept their speaking styles, which I really liked. Your writing style has good flow and I could totally see Kane writing a petition against a professor. I read both chapters and I found your characterization of Leland as more of a bookworm who gets coerced into social situations by Kane to be very interesting. Referencing Kane's "principles" made me especially happy. I hope that you continue this story! It's great so far. :D
| LoyalSark chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
Oh, Leland, nobody forgets about Charles Foster Kane. :D I look forward to your continuing this.