Reviews for Bright Ribbons
Machaon's Apprentice chapter 8 . 4/7/2016
A promising beginning !
Bye Bye chapter 8 . 11/12/2014
ggggggggggggggoo chapter 7 . 11/12/2014
king chapter 6 . 11/12/2014
karl chapter 5 . 11/12/2014
karl chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
cool as evr
karl chapter 3 . 11/12/2014
cool the bst
karl chapter 2 . 11/12/2014
karl chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
cool as
Ender The Time Lady chapter 8 . 1/23/2011
Nice. they should try that somethime.
Ender The Time Lady chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
You are an incredible writer. I found myself getting scared at the same time as Darra. You are the most talented writer i have seen for a while!
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 8 . 12/12/2009
It sounds like the Jedi are slightly Amish. *hums Living in an Amish Paradise.*

By the way, Master Adi Galla and her cousin are both Jedi but they wear veil or veil like coverings on their heads.

Not having mirrors would hard for the males of any species that grows facial hair when they wish to shave.

I would also think that a Jedi student wouldn't need a note to explain tardiness to classes since the teachers could feel the truth through the Force.
lionesseyes13 chapter 7 . 12/8/2009
Great job again. I love the lesson, and I can't wait to see what Darra's present is:) Keep up the good work!
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 7 . 12/7/2009
She was late by two minutes on her first day and all she had to go on was 'be there by dawn?' In my opinion that's good.

Jude Watson's Jedi padawans are really pathetic if Ahsoka can hold her own against opponents like Asajj Ventress and General Grievous. Especially seeing that Grievous has killed Knights and Masters
lionesseyes13 chapter 6 . 12/1/2009
This was a nice chapter. I'm glad that Tru was finally chosen, and the conversation between them is really great, because finally the stress they are under is gone for awhile. This was a sweet chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
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