Reviews for Lonely
SexySade chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Really well written and so sweet! They are such a great match and people do tend to forget that Melissa is a vulnerable young woman under all that confidence and ridiculously creative cursing lol.
ClassicalCynicism chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Yay! Kurz the Knight to the rescue! And I loved how you showed Melissa'a feelings in this fic. It make her seem more vulnerable and human than the macho bad-ass chick that can knock you out with one punch. Good job.
Akina chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
It's great)
Miss DnG chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Thats such a sweet romantic story :) I love it!
Tabasc0 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Agree with the below, this one works. And it is a couple that doesn't get near enough attention.
FullmetalShortOne chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
gah! so cute. not enough of these two! keep it up! :D good job keeping them in character too.
Akanke chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Very good; we need more KurzMao fics like this
Kell chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Great! I love this couple!
unkeptsecret chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Bueno!

I am delighted to see your take on this couple. Mao is, indeed, a fantastic character and woefully under-utilized because people seem to forget that she is more than a foul-mouthed former drill sergeant. Mao is *so* caring for her team members that she, undoubtably, needs affection too, and you win the gold star for pinging on that.

Really solid work and a pleasure to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
WOW...it's...it's...GREAT! hoho .