|Reviews for Love Revolution|
| Winter.Waltz chapter 1 . 1/21
I see a number of mistakes in the grammar, but honestly, I can sort of whisk past that because English isn't you first language, and by Ra, the characters are perfect- you have written Kiri very well! Most writers tend to fumble when writing her, what with her indifferent and aloof personality. Narumi's reaction upon seeing her after two years was also very much believable and in-character.
I was oddly satisfied when Billy broke the news that Kiri never quite mentioned Ochiai either, aha XD (I am an ardent Narumi x Kiri shipper, so...) I'm getting confusing vibes from Billy, however, what with him teasing Kiri about Narumi one moment, and then putting his arm around her shoulder right in front of him the next (I find this almost like an attempt at trying to make him jealous, ha ha). Hopefully he ships it as well :D
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| YoruichiGoddessOfFlash chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Update please! Kirumi!
| yori yolan chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Great story please continue it
| yurumi chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
next chapter please!
| crowdstroia chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Update soon please
The story was flowing. You didn't make the characters became OOC. It felt like I really can feel Narumi and Koshiba feelings about their separation.
| PleaseGirl chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
| MerciaLachesis chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
| taly chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
if it's really gonna be continued then why does it it take you 2 YEARS! to continue we are dying to read the rest!
| Kusami32 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
so awesome! i hope you put lots of fluff in the next chapter ;D
| YuniX-2 chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
It's such a shame this story was never completed! It's the only one I've seen so far that actually captures the feel of the manga.
| BlueBerry147 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
| Eoeo chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Woah... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Johonna Marie chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
uggg. dang billy!
sigh...i hope u show him soon!
| sweetheart276 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
| NightHorrors chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Wow! I love please write more!