|Reviews for Distance|
| JIMIRMA chapter 8 . 12/29/2013
Nice and amount of detail.
| kiroigenaya chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
please write more soon!
| nighttheraven chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
| Venus914 chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
I thought that this was about Harry's life away from the wizarding world..,his new life, new friends, new experiences, etc . How can he grow if he still clings to the old? I dont have the life and death experience Harry has with the Weasleys but it is remarkably easy for me to let go and not look back. He shouldn't feel responsible for Voldemort. Anyway, if Voldie wins and attack the muggle world, the army would take care of them. Eventually, Voldie and his ilk would die as the muggles are many. Harry could disappear forever and not get his hands dirty. With the gifts and letter, he just made his old friends happy. They get to have gifts without spending on Harry. Second, they now felt safer because Harry promised to kill Voldie! They would continue to take advantage of him because they know he will always solve their problems for them. He shouldn't have left if he's going back. All that brilliant planning and maneuvers are wasted! Break should be the title and not Distance if he just wanted a break.
Im not criticizing your way of writing but rather the story. Im just disappointed. There's so few stories about Harry leaving the Wizarding world to fend for itself. Most of it is oneshot. The other are Dark Harry. This is the first story i've read that attempts to deal with how his life is away from the wizarding world...until i've read his promise to go back.
If there are wrong spelling...please forgive me. Im writing on my phone and the keys are so small.
| Venus914 chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
Condolence about your Granny. :(
Anyway, im a little disappointed about your plan to have her return to the Wizarding world and kill Voldemort. I thought she grew a spine or backbone! I thought that this story was abiut her getting fed up and letting the sheep deal with Voldemort. She already got away. Why would you hinted about her going back? The friends she lost are not irreplaceable. Besides, it's just the Weasleys (Hermione is a future Weasley so i consider her one) and the world will continue on without them. Besides, Ron is a prejudiced bigot and Gin-Gin will cry that she lost the Potter and Black money.
| Miss Insane Insanity chapter 8 . 8/25/2013
Your stories are all so amazing and original. I wish you would update them!
| MaKayla McKinze chapter 8 . 8/5/2013
It has been put together nicely. I quite like the ending, as well. A small enough cliffhanger to hold onto anticipation, but not large enough to drive one absolutely bonkers.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/15/2013
finish the story
| cuteknight101 chapter 8 . 6/4/2013
| ladyowl chapter 2 . 6/3/2013
good job, quick note... Switzerland isn't Eu, and doesn't use the euro. they have the franc.
| deathlover25 chapter 8 . 5/18/2013
| FranticHamster chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
i hope you continue this story i did not expect it to be so good when i started reading it. The plot is very well done and i hope you do not let this story die.
| Bumpkin chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
I loved the beginning of this story, really loved it, in fact I searched all over to try and find it again - but I saw on your profile that this was now on your abandoned stories list... ah well, par for the course with free entertainment eh? Anyway, I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed how smart Harry was at the beginning, how he planned everything out and got it all done. I do think you could have gotten more depth if you had flip-flopped between Harry/Hazel and the reactions back in the wizarding world of his disappearance, and then of course flip-flopping between how H was coping and what was happening with the DE's, and the school, and of course the Order... but as you are not continuing this I will sign off with a 'Thanks for sharing' and hope that you might find your muse again in the future.
| Beyogi chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Well... this story is pretty decent so far. Except for the fact that the MASSIVE anachronisms kill me. Could you please try to avoid them? It gets really annoying. Is it that hard to not use internet and smartphones in a story?
Anyway, thank you for writing,
| Beyogi chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Well this is interesting. I wonder how his friends will react once Harry is gone. I really hope this isn't too bashy. Anyway, I guess I just have to continue reading.
Thank you for writing,