|Reviews for Escape from a Better World|
| Renegade Hero chapter 1 . 9/5
This is cute, Flash is a precious cinnamon roll. I can kinda see this going down, especially with the new Justice League trailer. Really enjoyed this.
| batiluca27 chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
| sarsha008 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I love how Wally notices all the subtle smiles and warmth of Bats, great job! Thanks for writing! :D
| Chem-Death chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I love it. That scene was one of my favorite and funniest in that episode. :D
| I 3 WAlly chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
This story is amazing. I really liked the interaction in this story. Keep it up! :)
| bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
aww that was really cute haha! great work!
| Jazyrha chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Yosh. This the first of those reviews I promised you.
Owkay. Here I go! D
I love the way you entertwined the 'real' Justice League (the exact same words as in the episode, and such) but made it completely your own work. I mean, you used the lines, but gave so much more insight to them. You don't take away from the original, you only add.
I really liked that.
"This may be Batman, but it wasn't Batman at all. Not mine"
- That was a really beautiful line, because it sums up pretty much /everything/. They're all themselves, except for the fact they aren't at all. I love the way you conveyed all that in such simplicity. (Whenever /I/ try taking a shot at it, I end up rambling for pages... XD)
Loved the remark about 'If I had Supes' lasor vision' XD
Again, the remarks about Batman not being 'his' Batman love.
Ha! You know what? When Batman was like 'not going to' I panicked for a slight moment in the real episode. Like, OMG DOES HE AGREE? And then I realised, about a few seconds later: Ah. Minds. The /same/. Plan won't work.
But, really, he had me there for a second! I love how Wally's all: bu-bu-bu... Batman? ALWAYS has a plan? Because yeah. That should be Batman's slogan or something. XD
It was fun to see Wally think of a plan. I really loved that, you know. It wasn't just because he /could/, but because he /had to/. To me, it was like, since Batman wouldn't do it, Flash would back him up. Like buddies do, in a sense XD
The description was really good. Not much to comment on that.
Do you know I have that code "91939" memorised? He said in the episode and I was all: I HAVE TO MEMORIZE! BATMAN'S SECRET ACCES CODE! (Since I'm a /total/ nerd like that, yes XD)
And the 'But who could anticipate you' made me a WallyxBruce-fan to start with. It's just so... I don't know /right/ XD And since it's coming from BATMAN who can anticipate EVERYONE, it's like... whoa! Love confession! XD (Except not, but yeah.)
I also love the way you said that Wally didn't really know when he became friends with Batman. I think it really must go like that. Nothing big, nothing spectacular, just being captured by your evil-double-gangers and being "dude, Bats is my best friend. Ever."
And the promise? Awh! That's /so/ cute! Really, it was! And completely in character. I mean, Wally would /so/ make Bruce promise him just that. Again, nothing dramatic, nothing huge, just 'stay who you are, because that is who I like.' And in a way, that's the cutest thing someone could ever think about someone else, right?
And I so much love you for adding 'for your sake'. I know, it's something really simple, but it makes it so much better, since it's Batman and Batman rarely does anything 'for your sake' only. I mean, it's always a bigger picture, a plan, something he can benefit from. But he wants to do that JUST for Wally. Simply because (and we all know it!) he doesn't want his friend to get hurt.
So yeah. I know this was more of my personal opinion than a review, but I can't really comment or add something.
It was a very good piece in all its simplicity.
- Jazy :D
| PirateTree chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I just read all your Jl fics. They made me smile like this :) see? Good job. More to come soon I hope?
| wild wolf free17 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Aww, Wally. Lovely.
| Jossi-kun chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Aw, cute! I just finished watching that episode. It made me sad to see what could happen to the Justice League w/o Flash. Anyways, awesome story, I loved the conversation between Flash & Batman at the end. It was perfect.
| screef chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Not much to say, i just wrote a review to favorite it :)
Very touching i thought
| whycantIdeletemtfuckingaccount chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
AW! In love with this :D Haha, I love the way Flash sees Bats! :) And the scene on the roof actually made me cry O.o (yes, I am a whimp, I admit it)
Thanks for sharing! :D
| warrior of worlds chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
aaw that was a nice story. to see the flash and batman friends! it was one of those "i knew it" moment
| Kirsten Erin chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Great story! I really enjoyed it.
Keep up the great work!
| Secret Thought chapter 1 . 8/15/2009