Reviews for The End of Bella and Edward
Lizmny3 chapter 21 . 9/21/2010
omg this is sooooooo good i just finished reading it through hurry and update
J.DRAST chapter 21 . 2/1/2010
Hello. Everytime Bella and Edward confront each other, they end up at odds and Bella storms away. But, a wedding on the beach sounds nice. I can't believe Esme and everyone else is so accepting of this situation, of Bella leaving Edward and marrying/having a child with Malachi. And, goodness sakes, riding motorcycles while pregnant, ready to deliver in a couple weeks! Isn't that a little risky? Carlisle didn't want her to stress out too much, over her confrontation with Edward because it wouldn't be good for the baby, then she goes motorcycle riding without thinking about the safety of herself and the baby. Tisk, Tisk. And she'll be getting married about a week after she has the baby. I hope she'll be back to normal for it. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
J.DRAST chapter 20 . 2/1/2010
Hello. I was right, but didn't know that Charlie gave him Bella's grandma's ring to use. How sentimental. The Cullens took it well, all except Edward. I liked the usual playful banter between Bella and Emmett. Gotta keep reading! Thanks.

Suzan Noerr
J.DRAST chapter 19 . 2/1/2010
Hello. Well, Billy sure has a wealth of knowledge, to help Bella. Didn't anyone notice her getting "huge?" And Jacob, so loyal, always stands by Bella's side. Everyone needs a friend like that. I couldn't believe she told Charlie right away. I didn't think she would. I didn't think Charlie would understand, but he took it better than I thought he would. What WERE he and Malachi talking about? I bet Malachi asked for her hand in marriage. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
edf-k chapter 19 . 12/17/2009
I'm still finding the idea of a pregnant vampire to be very funny. Wonder what Edward's going to think/do.
J.DRAST chapter 18 . 11/23/2009
Hello. An interesting chapter. I was glad that Edward apologized to Bella and told her that he still wanted to be a family and he'd understand if she still wanted to be with Malachi. But now she's confused about who to choose. Then to find out she's pregnant! That's a shocker! And probally to Malachi. That may force her hand in who she'll choose to be with. What will happen when she talks to Billy-keep writing so I'll find out soon! Thanks. Suzan Noerr
kd88 chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
great chapter... wow i love that you have bella so conflicted... and the whole imprint pregnancy thing it's pretty good... but wouldn't one say that edward imprinted on bella hence the whole i cant be without you... my heart breaks when we arent together crap... so a new vamp comes along and she is attracted to him too... just make sure you arent putting yourself in a bind... amazing writing i really enjoy this story! keep it up :) yeayy
edf-k chapter 18 . 11/19/2009
WTF! A pregnant vampire, too rich. Love the twist on the imprint item as well and look forward to more.
kd88 chapter 17 . 11/11/2009
great chapter! i was waiting patiently for the fight! :) i'm so proud of you for continuing the story :) keep it up you're an excellent writer!
J.DRAST chapter 17 . 11/7/2009
Hello. This was an interesting chapter. The fighting went pretty much as I expected, but I DIDN'T expect Edward to be in pain on the ground, shouting to Bella, and she went to him and had Seth take him back to the house. That suprised me. So, she does still have concern for him. I'm glad that everyone helped to "take the Volturi down." I'm also glad that that threat is over, except for Felix, Marcus and Caius, and the guard, etc. I hope that they don't want revenge. I'm anxious to hear what happens next. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
EZ chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
ARG! KEEP POSTING! THIS STORY ID ONE OF THE BEST IVE READ SO FAR! U CANT STOP NOW! CONTINUE! CONTINUE DARN IT! U ROCK AT WRITING! ~ EZ
E chapter 4 . 10/31/2009
I LOVED THE FACT THAT EDWARD AND BELLA ARE NO LONGER TOGETHER. I MEAN I AGREE WITH U. THOSE TWO ARE A PAIR TOO OFTEN! KEEP WRITING! GOODLUCK! ~ E
J.DRAST chapter 16 . 10/30/2009
Hello. Lots of info in this chapter. I'm glad that help is starting to arrive. That was nice of Quil to keep Bella company. He is a good guy. I always liked him and Embry.

I still believe that Edward did this. Let's read as more vamps come to help. Thanks. (Even though it was boring, LOL)

Suzan Noerr
deadgirlforever chapter 15 . 10/22/2009
no wonder the last part says IceGrl. i am not being rude or insulting. sorry but i don't beg. its one of my many faults but i will ask for you to continue writing. thank you.
J.DRAST chapter 15 . 10/17/2009
Hello. Don't let others get you down. You must be true to yourself. This story is "your baby" and you decide what to write, how to write it, how to end it, etc. And if some reader or readers don't like it, then there's no rule that says they have to continue to read it. They can go read something else! (Instead of criticizing you.) If they can do better, they can write their OWN story, and write it however they want. I think it is unique when people have different takes on the twilight saga books and use their imaginations and creativity, to ultimately entertain readers, while at the same time doing something they really enjoy doing-writing! There are just some cruel people out there in the world who delight in hurting others,in your case emotionally. This is a lesson easily learned-you can't please everyone, so only please yourself. Sorry I've ranted so long. I do hope you continue the story. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
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