|Reviews for Fox Trapped at Yokai Gakuen|
| Myrolerian chapter 22 . 1/29
Hmm, was looking for a sequel but I didn't see one. Maybe somewhere else or no longer active? Guess I'll see in time but would like a reply if you could.
On from that, it was pretty nice. Honestly the wedding and all that seemed a little rushed but it went by smoothly for the amount of words and there were moments it made me laugh. Personally I like inner moka more so the fact that it was mainly here was nice and even if you made Naruto hesitant of his secret you didn't make him seem like a bitch. He wasn't totally oblivious to shit and all that either which was a bonus.
The scene where Sasuke "killed" Naruto didn't really have much detail, same was said for where he met his mother, but I was able to piece it together since I know Canon and have seen a lot of Naruto Fanfics. I would try to have more detail there in the future... also, it seemed like you mainly did that just so Naruto could meet his mom but... one second Sasuke 'kills' Naruto and then the rest of the story Sasuke has absolutely nothing on him, eh... I know the reason for it but you could have also done more development there.
Overall, not bad and was worth a read. I'd read more if it came out, but we'll see how it goes I guess.
| Chillman22 chapter 14 . 1/27
AND lets not forget that you've turned Moka's eldest sister it to a young, female version of Jiraiya, (sigh) that pervy-sage pretty much turns anyone into a "SUPER" pervert, oh well, every men are pervert, so are women they just hide it better than men.
| Scoobygirl45 chapter 22 . 12/27/2013
This story was awesome!
| NARUMOKA FOREVER chapter 8 . 12/5/2013
LET TSUKUNE FALL IN LOVE WITH KURUMU.
| Zatarra12345 chapter 22 . 10/26/2013
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| Guest chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
isn't the whole thing made-up anyway why would you have to REMEMBER it
| SPark681 chapter 9 . 9/5/2013
Damn good chapter hopefully this will ease Naruto's burden a bit and maybe it'll change Tsukune's thoughts towards Naruto. Keep up the great work!
| dax larson chapter 22 . 8/21/2013
this story is awesome and can you please continue with this story because it is very awesome and sweet and i love it.
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
I think tsukune has a smart ass on his hands
| ninja chapter 22 . 6/10/2013
you said you would make a sequel so hurry up
| Kittens Kat chapter 22 . 4/16/2013
I LIKED THE ENDING! I THINK THEM GETTING TO GO TO NARUTO'S HOME AS BEING LIKE THE END OF THE DAY, SOMETHING WHOLESOME AND FULFILLING! VERY GOOD STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! THANK YOU!
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/13/2013
My only problem is how weak u make sasuke plz fix
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/15/2013
I hope he kills sauska!
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
You need to drop the whole Naruto is soo forgiving of Kohona for what the did to him and instead have it to where he wants to see the destruction of Kohona!
| ethan chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I like it naruto and moka hmmmm thats a smart mach