Reviews for Apparition
Shelomit chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
An enjoyable and well-written fic. Piett's reaction to the "ghost" seems realistic; after sufficient repetition, he knows something fishy is up, yet has the sense not to investigate even as he becomes intrigued. (Having a commanding officer who can read one's thoughts must be a terrible inconvenience.) One quibble: it seems unlikely that Piett would have been merrily imbibing Imperial propaganda "when he was young." The man looks to be at least in his mid-forties; the actor was 46 in RotJ. An officer of that age would not only have grown up under the Republic, but likely also received his first commission pre-putsch.

Both Piett's ability to see the titular apparition and the burst of empathy he feels along with Vader in the last few paragraphs suggest that he might be very slightly Force-sensitive. Perhaps there are scads of marginal Force-sensitives left in the Galaxy who are little enough of a threat that Sidious never bothers disposing of or exploiting them. It is an interesting thought.
CommChatter chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That's kinda depressing. I like it.
lotrprincess chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I guess that's how Vader would think of his children all those years, after being told that he had killed both Padme and her unborn child. I'm actually feeling sorry for him. I don't often have empathy for villains. Good job.
CodeNameCarrot chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Haunting, left me with an ache for Vader, wanting more.
MaggiSakura chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
So freaking sad that I almost cried.
ilyena damodred chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I really like this fic, thank you for writing
anemix chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
This is really sad. But I wonder about the repercutions of this if it actually happened. Keep writing!

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Fan-Tasticly-Lame chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Aww. This is so sad! :'( Wonderfully written though. Thank you. :)
Cath chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Oh, this is so very very good. Well done on bringing character to Piett, and shedding a new light on Vader. So fantastic :)

Cheers!
Cipher Nine chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
That was so sad I nearly cried... *sniff*
endlessvamp chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
So sad...T_T
Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Bittersweet...That is my comment...

Even in death, Luke always be the light to the Chosen One...

At least, Anakin have a Guardian Angel to look out for him...

It's quite cute...

Take care...
Amorye chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Aww, this was very moving. Excellent, just excellent. I like the idea that Piett knows something of emotional value to Vader.
anakin and padme 2013 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
great story i always liked piett please write more soon
Aisling-Siobhan chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
very moving. you did a brilliant job!
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