|Reviews for The Butterfly Effect|
| Triste1 chapter 10 . 1/3/2010
Full circle indeed. A fitting title considering that the beginning became an ending, that in all honesty is a beginning in itself. If that even made any sense.
It was a good fic. I rather liked the OOC Alucard. He was far more human and far more relatable to, although I will admit to having a good dose of appreciation for the gore of canon after a rough day and/or rough tale. It fulfills a certain quota of violence that I'm inclined towards. The bit about the voices is certainly an interesting twist. It explains a few things to a degree and I find it to be believable; although Integra giving such a long speech in a story-teller manner is a bit hard for me to picture.
There were a few mistakes about the place grammar-wise. Nothing too severe but there nonetheless. Perhaps a beta reader or a brief run through when you have the time and inclination to correct them? It'd be quite a shame to leave such errors be when they detract from a perfectly good fic. That, of course, is simply my humble opinion and you're not obliged to listen to it.
Overall it was a good fic and I look forward to any new ones on the horizon, as well as any updates of current WIPs. Keep writing and good luck.
| YaoiBatman chapter 10 . 12/20/2009
I love this story. The what if is awesome! XD
| Raina Meldamiriel chapter 10 . 12/17/2009
omg totally awesome this was totally the best i loved it x i hope you do a sequal x
| KawaiiKittyChan chapter 10 . 12/16/2009
While I can see a few vague lines that may connect to my story, I can clearly see everything in here was new and original. It's too bad we don't get to see what became of Alucard and Seras' Relationship after Alu got sealed again, but this is just as good, and at least as satisfying. While there were a few spelling mistakes it was nothing compared to the load of them I make when I write, and in your case they did not deteriorate from what is to my opinion a great story. Thanks for writing!
| policegirl chapter 10 . 12/15/2009
My compliments as always. I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s) in “Separation Anxiety”
I hope you also have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years!
| policegirl chapter 9 . 12/15/2009
I loved the final chapter of this story. It's less of an ending and more of a beginning
| Nightmares are dead chapter 10 . 12/13/2009
that was just a perfect end *-*
thanks you ever sop much for writing such beautiful stories
| shadowanime1 chapter 10 . 12/13/2009
that was really dark and horrific, i liked it.
you really expressed Seras's hatred for Jacob. the punishment was very fitting.
hope you write more, bye
| Lara chapter 10 . 12/13/2009
Thank you for this epilogue. It was well done. Happy Christmas and New Years.
| Darkangl28 chapter 10 . 12/12/2009
A good epilogue, congratulations on a good fic, you supplied a bit of everything and this one goes in my favorites for sure!
| Blazing Demon chapter 10 . 12/12/2009
And thus ends a tale of love, evil and vengance.
Until next time...
| Angel Reaper chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
Ah, sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, I had finals to take. Usually I take a good chunk of time to really think about constructive things to say about fanfics, so it wouldn't do you justice to just give a quick praise and then go off to study.
Anyway, Integra's explanation of the seals was really quite interesting, I had never really thought of them as a way to preserve Alucard's sanity. It was even more interesting that he wanted all of his higher powers sealed. A normal Alucard would never do that, but I guess amnesiac Alucard really has grown to care about Seras to want it done.
It felt like most of the chapter was spent on explaining things, then ended quickly with Seras's changing. I had been wondering how her changing would come about in this universe, and it does seem pretty plausible, but I do wish that more time had been spent on this moment. Not with any outbursts of romantic confessions or anything, but at least an examination of emotions and realizing "Yes, I care about you in my own way".
Ok, now the epilogue. An interesting revenge on Seras's part, I would have never expected her to keep Jacob alive as a ghoul but forbid him from eating. I kind of wonder where Alucard during this, and if Integra knows that she's doing this, but I suppose that Jacob was always mainly Seras's issue, so it's only fair that Seras deals with him alone.
Overall, this story was an interesting retelling of the Hellsing beginning we all know and love. I'll be waiting for the next story you post up. Until then, keep up the good work!
| BlazingMidnightRain chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
ROCK ON! 'bout time that jerk off got what he deserved and way to go seras! I'm sort of disappointed that alrucard wasn't there; somewhere in the background, but o well. This was a very appropriate ending.
i loved the story all the way through _
| Sammich Man chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
Well well! At the end already, eh? Some small apologies for the delayed review; school was beating on me (not anymore though). :P Chapter 9 had an interesting take on the ending, you were able to switch over to Alucard's point of view fairly easily, it was a good transition. A nice good read, thanks for writing it up! Hope to see more of your ideas on the intertubes!
| Moonlight and Mischief chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
Nice sweet revenge.
Can't wait for Separation Anxiety!