Reviews for Takeo's Day
wata-sama chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I thought it was a brilliant fanfic. but it could be a bit longer I love this book so much and I would love to read more storys about the tales of the otori
blocksofcolour chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Ah! An Otori fanfic! Wow.

This is the first I've read - and it's excellent!

The way you write them is different from the way Lian Hearn does, but I think it's still as gorgeous as his writing.

I love that Kaede can catch him off-guard so easily! Sometimes, he needs someone to put him in his place, and it's more than fitting that it should be Kaede.

I love the simpleness of the moment where Kaede tell him she's pregnant. It says everything that needs to be said, and no more.

The only thing that bothers me is that this would in fact be between 'The Brilliance of the Moon' and 'The Harsh Cry of the Heron' - not 'Heavens Net is Wide'.