Reviews for Sacred
Homework Hurts Trees chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
This is epic - no further explanation needed
Don't Be Such A Sour-Wolf chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
Wow I love this story

You are such a good writer - and quite evil making us wait lol, just kidding I don't mind (well that's a lie)

I love Anakin's fatherly attitude and how he voices his desire to throw Jo'Seth out an airlock

And I love Jo'Seth he seems so sweet

The part where Ahsoka begged for Padme's dress made me laugh, methinks that Ahsoka will manage to get her hands on that dress - even if she has to steal it lol

I like Padme's vocab too :L

Update again soon please
Billie Verfasser chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I love this! You HAVE to update it!
Don't Be Such A Sour-Wolf chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I love this story
Please don't desert it, I may scream and then breakdown :L
I love how you've portrayed Anakin as a father to Ahsoka, I love his dilemma with her first date - every fathers worst nightmare - and I love the conflict with him wanting her to be happy and wanting to protect her.
I also love the relationship between Padme and Anakin and how it still has that young love flirtatiousness to it.
The "Skycrawlers" bit made me laugh, definately a very Ahsoka-like thing to call them, she is so much like Anakin that its scary
I love your continuous use of elevated lexis, such as "articulate" and "methodical", they make the story seem so sophisicated and literate
I do hope you keep writing this and update again soon, I hate it when people leave brilliant stories like this.
I have finished my little rant now, please do update again.
Lilianne-Rachelle chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
love it!

can't wait for more :)
ilyena damodred chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
You write the best Padmé/Anakin fanfiction on the net. Thank you.
nayden4ever chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I can't get enough of reading about Padme and Anakin from your point of view. George Lucas could learn a lesson or two from your phenonomenal storytelling of P&A...you understand them so well. Please please please oh please continue with Sacred...this story has so much potential with not just P&A but also my next fave couple in Obi-Wan & Sabe. I love your work! Thx, Shawn, for sharing your creative world with FF readers like me. :)
Serina Tsuki chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
I can't wait for the next chapter!
zgape chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I can always count on you to come through Shawn30.

You are so talented and really get this couple.

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

Hot! Hot! Hot!
Curtis Zidane Ziraa chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I love this! I've read the whole mini-series twice now, and just realized I never reviewed it the first time around. So here it is the second time around! This is so awesome, keep going! I like several of your star wars fictions.
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I love it! Once again you have managed to spin a tale full on intrigue, romance, drama, and humor into one delectable treat. I can't to see Ahsoka's first date, Obi-Wan and Sabe's night, and how Anakin reacts to Padme in that little black dress ;-D Nice job!
IloveAP chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Very nice job, Obi-Wan has made it to first base with Sabe.

Like Anakin and Padme just being married with children.

Also love your descriptions they paint vivid pictures in my mind.

Looking forward to chapter two.
Padme52 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Your unique storytelling and writing style are most remarkable and I savor every word and phrase as I slowly read them allowing the events described to unfold before me.

Your erotic descriptions are second to none and are no only enjoyable for the characters but for the readers as well.

I am a fan of all of your Anakin/Padme work.

I patiently await your next installment.
Daphnium chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Very steamy. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Trude chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
really good and HOT
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