|Reviews for Breaking all the Rules Tonight|
| Jacob Malfoy chapter 14 . 2/22
I love possessive stories they're so hot when it comes to fucking. Don't you agree?
| Aleja chapter 25 . 1/13
(Español) He leído muchas historias y podría decir que esta es la mejor. Me quito el sombrero ante ti...
(Ingles) I have read many stories and you could say that this is the best. I tip my hat to you ...
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/5
I'm only on chapter 9 and I can not control myself. You are a master... best I've read.
| WalkerTRngr chapter 25 . 10/13/2013
Amazing! Don't know what else to say one of the best stories on this site!
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/13/2013
So great and do hot! Love the ending.
| Tony7323 chapter 16 . 4/15/2013
| Tony7323 chapter 9 . 4/14/2013
Wow That was Very Naughty You Write Smut Very Well.. I just Loved it
| Jencun chapter 22 . 3/25/2013
| LJLanham chapter 22 . 3/6/2013
I don't know how I missed this... I love all your stuff, and think/thought I'd read it all. Anyway, I just wanted to say that while I may have read this before- I hadn't read it before I wrote a scene a long while back that had Booth talking about having Crayola name a shade of blue "Temperence." I should have known I wasn't the first to come up with it, LOL. But I want you to know that I didn't "steal" it, either. :-) Now, on with my reading...
| EdelweissSparkles chapter 25 . 1/21/2013
Oh my goodness, this so hot. In the, "I can't catch my breath right now because it was written so amazingly real" kind of way. Wow.
| surrendersomething chapter 25 . 12/27/2012
So I started watching Bones on the recommendation of a friend in September, and I'm currently working my way through the end of season 6. I've been trying to avoid spoilers as much as possible as I've really not wanted to know what's happening, but being a reader and occasional writer in the Castle fandom, I decided to have a little trawl through the Bones fandom here to see if there was anything good.
I set my filter to stories with the most reviews and your name came up so I decided to check some of your stuff out, and this and it's prequel were the first stories I tried. I absolutely loved them both, I thought you captured the characters really well and it was hot and sweet and a real evolution of their characters, whilst still being in character. I'm off to check out some of your other stuff and some other authors around, but I just wanted to let you know that this was the first one I read and I loved it, so thank you.
| EveyEve1215 chapter 25 . 12/8/2012
Wow,what a beautiful ending to all the smuttiness:). To think of all the orgasms I was amazed Brennan and Booth were able to out,let alone bowl. lt was #ness mixed with love :).
| alexiarrose chapter 25 . 9/22/2012
Wow. Seriously hot, sweet fic. Sorry I'm catching up to it so late, but I'm so glad I have. Love how they push each other's buttons. Really, really nice job!
| sardella.belle chapter 25 . 9/21/2012
love! fantastic! sweet ending!
| boothaddict77 chapter 22 . 8/23/2012
You know, this is one of my favourite fics ever and I haven't left a review before. Sorry bout that. It's just so...incredibly intense. Leaves you drained in every sense.
I've got to say, though, I totally disagree with the idea that Sweets knows them better now. He practically ruined the show by ushering in that last season the way he did. I unearthed an old review I'd left you for Inquiring Minds a while ago because a few of my readers asked me to elaborate on my Sweets rant and the choice to leave him out of the story I'm writing, and I stand by what I had to say then:
I think that was the real turning point right there-when they stopped putting up a united front with Sweets despite all their divided views and let him split them apart and attack them separately-they're different together,and noone could possibly understand just how. Except them,ofcourse.
Start with the time he didn't tell Brennan about Booth's death-just carelessly experimenting on them like they were lab rats and not people 'cause he couldn't possibly understand how they feel about each other.
Then he tells Booth he doesn't love Brennan-SERIOUSLY?-when he's finally ready to admit he does, and goes so far as to suggest it's all in his head,when Booth's all about following his heart-or he should be,left to his own devices,anyway.
THEN he tells Booth he *is* in love with Brennan and it has to be him who makes the move when neither of them are ready, and Booth knows it...and after all those years, all that dancing around, this little twerp-this tiny little mop-haired weasel who can barely wrap his mind around what they do for a living and who they are individually, let alone together- sends them to opposite sides of the world-telling Booth Daisy was leaving and Brennan would too,when she hadn't even broached the subject herself,like a petulant little child-'you're just the one with the partner,whatever that means.'
THEN he confuses Booth by suggesting a number of things-that he should take the new girlfriend to meet his son,that he still loves Brennan and knows it subconsciously(only sensible thing he's said,even though he'd screwed things up enough by that point that it didn't make a difference, specially when he follows it up by saying he should tell blondie the truth,which Booth didn't,or simply couldn't,as we know),that he ought to propose marriage to the wrong woman for the wrong reasons-he even went with him to buy a ring,for God's sake,hungover and caught up in his own emotional turmoil as usual.
Now Gordon Gordon (who knows what the 'problem' is 'right off the bat' but counsels hope and patience instead of telling his patients what they aren't prepared to hear,who helps guide them when they are finally ready to confront the truth in their hearts instead of suggesting love may be the result of coma induced brain activity,who repeats his name twice and drinks tea at tea time)-he knew how to give out real advice. He understands that Sweets needs Booth and Brennan, and that their mere presence in his life helps the baby duck find his way, that he gets from them more than he could ever give. But then Sweets has to go and actively screw things up. Sigh. It's like he's just begging to be hated. The writers thought the audience wanted drama,and they gave it to us in the form of a rosy-cheeked cherub-faced supporting character, who's clueless,and cute,and 12. I liked how Zack handled being those things so much better.(and there you have it again,another failing of Sweets-he knows Zack didn't kill OR eat anyone,and he knows that just a word of this and he could be free of the shackles and chains-literally-but he doesn't say anything. Perfect time for his morals to kick in.)I just hope him having a gun doesn't become the focal point of this season-he's trying to do Booth's job all the time anyway,and he doesn't come across as nearly as attractive doing it, not that anyone could-and Daisy's gotten from annoying to...*annoying*.
And yet...we've had a whole episode revolving around Sweets and his gun since then-though, you know, rangemaster Booth wasn't too hard on the eyes, even if he assaulted the other senses. :P In any event,you know you've been taken for a ride when Booth starts asking a twelve year old for parenting advice and won't admit it. That's really taking it too far. (Ironically, there's nothing wrong in that department either-Parker's a great kid, and Booth's concerns proved to be unfounded). He should have just pulled over and left him stranded on the side of the road.