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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow so raw and painful. Poor Lassie. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow. Wow. I cannot even...comprehend the amount of...of FEELS. Now normally I prefer Shawn!whump, and while I bookmark Lassie!whump I usually don't read it. But this...I literally don't even have words. Profound, is a word that comes to mind. Heart shattering is another - a phrase, at least. Soul crushing despair...Seriously, well done. You did an amazing job portraying the emotion and really getting the audience to feel instead of just saying something like 'Lassie got shot, almost died, and Shawn flipped out.' I wish I could more coherently say how breathtakingly you wrote this, how perfectly executed it was. But alas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story actually made me cry! :O (not like blubbery, but a few silent tears) It was really good and emotional. I liked it a lot. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm sorry my review can't do this story justice, but I really loved the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is AMAZING! I wish there was a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow... this must be one of the best Psych fics I've ever heard... Let me just tell you, you are an amazing writer... the plot was good, but the way you carried it out was brilliant. I even started to get a lump in my throat at one point... I've love a sequel, of[/if] Lassiter waking up later, perhaps dealing with all he told Shawn... or that Shawn saved his life... But you ending was great as well, so that a sequel isn't actually needed [just desired, how can you expect us readers to not want more?] This fic was truly amazing! - Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Hey this story was great! I feel like there should be another chapter, or a sequal, but I guess thats authors perogative. You should definatley write Another psych fic tho, you depicted the characters brilllianlty |
![]() ![]() Aw shit. Man, this was intense! This is some dark stuff... Lassie contemplating suicide. That came out of nowhere. I never really thought Lassie to be the guy who showed fear, even in his last moments, but I can live with this take, though I don't prefer certain plot points. Kudos to you for writing such a coherently intense plot. I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an amazing story. Poor both of them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I give you full marks for harrowing, ruthless intensity. It was very gripping, twisty, angsty, sharp and edgy- like electrified barbed wire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have to say that I felt a lump in my throat while reading this. It felt so real and doomy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved loved loved this story! You are a fantastic author, and the way you capture the characters' personalities is great! Can't wait to see more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, tell me you have a sequel to this? You don't have a sequel - I just checked. How! Your... your characterization of these characters, of this 'verse, is heart-wrenching in the most beautiful of ways. Seriously. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Powerful stuff there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sooo sad but I love the way you've described the relationship between Shawn and 'Lassie' I would love to read a sequel of your wonderful story. Sorry for my bad English; I'm German and it's not my native language |