Reviews for Dusk
Guest chapter 15 . 6/12
I was enjoying this and whilst I like the Cullens being involved I really don't like the edward/Bella scenes. And the way she keeps trying to imagine what life would be like with him. I'm just not feeling the story anymore so I won't be reading anymore. Which is a shame.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/12
*Jake stupid auto correct
Guest chapter 13 . 6/12
Really not happy with the Edward bike scene. That's Bella and James thing. Why cheapen and ruin it?
Your fan chapter 22 . 6/6
That was real hot!
Kayla chapter 8 . 11/16/2015
So far I'm loving this story...even better in Twilight.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
Love descripted lemons!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
do they never use a condom? damn
Guest chapter 8 . 1/5/2014
I hope they used protection...
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
So, was said 'dog' actually one of the La Push wolves?
Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
OH FUCK YOU LIKE WITHIN TEMPTATION TOO UGH YU FUCKING ROCK WE SHOULD BE BESTIES
LOVE YUR STORY SO FAR _ #TEAM JACOB
PastOneonta chapter 22 . 9/28/2013
This was a nice story, Jacob imprinting on Bella before she meets the Cullens. The wolves and the vamps working together is always interesting. The Pack was great.
Lahotes.Imprint chapter 22 . 7/4/2013
I liked how he broke the imprint to her. It was very... intimat.
April-Showers82 chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
I like your story so far. I am glad that you gave Bella a backbone and some wits, lol. I cracked up at the line "Who's afraid of the big bad wolf"; simply hilarious! Also, I thought it was very sweet of you to include your beta in the story.
kat kasie chapter 19 . 4/29/2013
I love this story!
kat kasie chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
Ummmm that escalated fast. Really. That's one way to tell Bella though
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