Reviews for The First Step
OMG chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
OMG so awesome you so need to continue and for me can you please make a break x gil or gil x break or vincent x break please but this is one of the best oz x gil gilx oz lemons i have ever read
WhiteNBlackRabit chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Hehe thats Break for ya!
LovelyDemon chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
So how was your night?

Love it~
li ross chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Nice!Nice!Nice! That was great so thank u so very much for it. And I'm sorry I can't leave any smarter comments, I'm just to sleepy.

First lemmon? It was very good.

Keep it up.

Wish u luck

LR
mockingbird13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Heehee. So cute. I love this fic. Gilbert is so loyal, and faithful, and protective, and sweet, and-*cuts herself off before this review turns into a Gil-obsessed babbling session* Don't really want to know how Break found out,,, :) :) :)
Prince-Dizzi chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
i know ive read this before when it was in its beginnning stages, but you cleaned it up pretty good. now your lemon part needs just a little more work and you'll have it down pat in no time. Lemons are never easy, TRUST ME. your words flowed the same as normal, though i did get a good laugh at Oz wanting to castrate Vincent with a rusty fork. though personally i think it would have been even funnier if it was a rusty spoon, much more painful way to destroy someone. die of infection or something...anyways, loved it and cant wait for the Seifer/Hayner oneshot you still havent posted.

yours truly,

Prince-Dizzi
nick0-Chant chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Make more!

I didn't see any mistakes...
Green Sprout chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
this was short but not short but thus this was gilxoz lemon I am happy3

break is such the bastard...

for some reason I want another part to this
LostDonut chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
lol XD

At first I thought Oz was going to be the Seme XP
Miyuko Yamada chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
hi, it was awesome! i am your sister's friend from school and she told me to look this up so here i am! this rocks! will there be a second chapter?
St00pendus chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Ha! Break cracks me up. Makes you wonder HOW he found out about that one... hehe
kyotoprincess chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Ohh! I really liked it :) But the story went a little to fast, if you know what I mean BUT that's to be expected for someone who wrote his/her first lemon. I know how you feel, trust me. I'm writing my first lemon too XD

Anywhoo, I think you did an excellant job! :D You could probably take it down a notch but whatever, I still loved it anyway _ Hope this helps :3
JuustSmile chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
What can I say? :) It was a hot GilXOz. Great work :D
Andy was a Boy then Girl chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
GAHH!

-fangirl sqeal-

very very nice.

Though I may suggest, making the lemon a bit longer, yes?

No flames here, this is one of the few Pandora Hearts fics that I like. Please keep up the coolness with your future work, which by the way, I am looking forward too!
XxXStarxDustXxX chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Oh my gosh! That was the most sexiest story I've read in a long time. It was incredibly hot and really romantic. I hope you write some more of this pairing soon!
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