Reviews for Noise
MW3addict chapter 1 . 3/9
This is a very cute one shot and you have written Jasper's character so perfectly. Great job
Anson Longbottom chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
And again, I say, "WOW."

Valeh, that is amazing. You are in these people's heads! The last bit was so suspenseful...I thought he was going to completely lose it! Then Alice came...of course she would see it and come back!

My favorite line: "And you are older than any dog in the world."

You are a fantastic writer! Anson
AnEmotionalVampire chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
That was a bit moving. Very Jasper like too. I loved how it was written too. :D
Lumberchuck chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Amazing writing, I love the line "In her eyes you find silence". beautiful. Alice/Jasper stories are awesome, and I think you described Jasper's longing for blood perfectly. Once again, amazing writing! :)
Laura 2468 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
cool story! Jasper almost lost it! You're a great writer!
StupidGord chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
No words can express how good this was. Brilliant.
Liehben chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Hey! Very nice work! I loved the way you combined sounds, noises and images to describe how difficult it must be to a vampire to simply ignore his need to feed on human blood. Poor Jasper! He probably suffers a lot... Well done. fav
marshmallow-martian chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Beautifully written, I love it
mind the music chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I am in awe.