Reviews for Helping
JeanetteMillerFan211 chapter 9 . 7/19/2014
Great story, I loved it. Great plot. Awful ending. What happened that edward had to leave the room? What about the new baby? What happens with that? U didn't answer that at all. U completely rushed the ending.
vampirelove41 chapter 9 . 7/15/2013
love it so cute
Debbie White chapter 9 . 6/7/2013
Great story! :) love it! :)
vampiregirl31 chapter 9 . 11/23/2012
awww i want more
Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 9 . 10/23/2012
i love this story
xxx chapter 9 . 9/29/2012
very cute
nbrian72 chapter 9 . 3/29/2012
sweet story
EdwardXXBella0922 chapter 9 . 1/18/2012
OMG no don't end it now i really like this its good you should add more like drama into the story i like please please please please right more its super good :)))
LittleMrsWhitlock chapter 9 . 7/31/2011
i for one thought it was a great ending! Well done!
blake18 chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
I thought this was a really good chapter
angel04une chapter 9 . 3/30/2011
Not the best ending but still a good story
darkangel0212 chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
keep it up
TWILIGHTreader1 chapter 9 . 1/17/2011
lol cute ending but damn, slow down lol hat was the quickest story ever! lol you should have mentioned her name... the baby i mean. also you should have mentioned lizzie calling edward daddy or him saying he adopted her. also why did ed's father even shouw up. loved the story but it felt like you just wanted to end it. :( which sucks bc i would have so loved to read more :)
TWILIGHTreader1 chapter 8 . 1/17/2011
good story...

but eeewwwwww

he liked it. was that really necessary lol
TWILIGHTreader1 chapter 5 . 1/17/2011
WHAT A DISSSS!: "Sure your weak, I suppose. But Bella not everyone can be strong because if everyone was people like me wouldn't have anything to protect."

man can a man be more cocky lol

i like the story i just feel like it's a bit fast paced. I mean they just meant and they are sleeping with each other. let alone the fact that HE's back after a very short, SHORT james-free time. :( (Shaking head)lol

but i like that story over all lol
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